Extermination 8.5

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Lady Photon and the eighteen year old Laserdream landed beside Armsmaster, making a small splash as they touched down.

You could see the family resemblance.  They weren’t supermodel good looking, but they were attractive people, even with their hair wet and plastered to their heads and shoulders by the rain.  Both wore costumes with a white base color, had heart shaped faces, full lips and blonde hair.  Lady Photon’s costume sported a starburst on her chest, with several of the lines extending around her body, or down her legs, going from indigo to purple as it got further from the center.  Her hair was straight, shoulder length, held away from her face by a tiara shaped much like the same starburst image on her chest.

Her daughter had a stylized arrow pointing down and to her right, on her chest, with a half dozen lines  trailing behind it, over her left shoulder, one line zig-zagging across the others.  The entire design gradually faded from a ruby red to a magenta color in much the same way her mom’s did.  Similar rows of lines with the zig-zag overlapping them ran down her legs and arms.  She didn’t dye her hair in her ‘color’ like her younger brother did -had, past tense-, or wear the tinted sunglasses, but she did wear a ruby red hairband over her wavy hair, to ensure she always had a coquettish sweep of hair in place over one eye, and to pull the magenta, red and white color scheme together.

More than anything else, though, the two of them had the look of people who had seen half their immediate family brutally and senselessly torn apart over the course of one terrible hour.  As though they’d had their hearts torn out of their chests and were somehow still standing.  It wasn’t that I had seen anyone in those circumstances before, but that look existed, and they had it.

It was painful to look at.  It reminded me of when my mom had died.  I’d been in a similar state.

Lady Photon – Photon Mom to Brockton Bay residents and the local news media – bent down by Armsmaster.  She created a shaped forcefield tight against his shoulder, lifted him with a grunt.

“Take him,” Lady Photon’s voice was strangely hollow, though firm.

“No.  I’m a better flier, and more likely to hurt that thing in a fight.  I’ll take the girl and help against Leviathan.”  Laserdream had a little more life in her voice than her mother did.

The girl.  Like I didn’t warrant a name, or it wasn’t worth the effort to remember.  A part of me wanted to stand up for myself, a larger part of me knew this wasn’t the time or place.

After a long few seconds of deliberation, Lady Photon nodded.  She looked like making that decision aged her years.

Laserdream and her mom looked at me.  I felt like I should say something.  Give condolences?  Tell them that their family had died well?  I couldn’t think of a way to put it that didn’t tell them something they already knew, or anything that wouldn’t sound horribly offensive or insincere coming from a villain.

“Let’s go get that-” I stopped, both because I suddenly felt that something like motherfucker was too crass, and because I wanted to bend down to pick up Armsmaster’s Halberd, the one with the disintegration blade, grabbing the pole of it with my good hand. “Let’s go get him,” I stated, lamely.

It took some doing for Laserdream to lift me without pressing against my broken arm or touching the blade. She wound up holding me with an arm under my knees and the crook of her elbow at my neck.  She held the Halberd for me.  I resigned myself to being cradled – there was no dignified way to be carried.  She had morning breath, a strangely mundane thing – she’d likely been woken up at half past six in the morning by the sirens, hadn’t had time to brush her teeth or eat before coming here.

She took off, smooth.  It felt like an elevator kicking into motion, except we kept going faster, had the wind in our faces.

My first time flying, if you discounted the experience of riding a mutant dog as it leapt from a building, which was sort of half-flying.  It wasn’t half as exhilirating as I’d thought the experience would be.  Tainted by the sombre, tense mood, the sting of the rain and the bitter chill that went straight through my damp costume and mask.  Each time she adjusted her hold on me, I had to fight that deep primal instinct that told me I was going to fall to my death.  She was adjusting her grip a lot, too – she didn’t have superstrength, and I couldn’t have been easy to carry, especially soaking wet.

My power’s range was almost double the usual, and I had zero clue as to why.  I wasn’t about to complain.  Using Laserdream’s armband and my right hand, I passed on details.

“He’s at CA-4, heading Northwest!”

The roads beneath us were damaged, shattered.  When Leviathan had shifted the position of the storm sewers, he’d gone all out, and he’d gone a step further than just the storm sewer – he’d also torn up the water supply network for the city.  The occasional pipe speared up between the slats in the sidewalk, fire hydrants were dislodged, and the water that poured from these was barely a trickle now.  That might have meant too much was leaking from the damaged pipes to give the water any pressure.

As he’d beaten a path deeper into the city, he had found opportunities to do damage on the way.  A police car had been thrown through the second story of a building.  A half block later, as he’d rounded a corner, he had elected to go through the corner of a building, tearing out the supporting architecture.  The structure had partially collapsed into the street.

We passed over a gas station he’d stampeded through, and Laserdream erected a crimson forcefield bubble around us to protect us from the smoke and heat of the ongoing blaze.

“BZ-4,” I reported.  Then I saw movement from the coast, called out through the armband’s channels, “Wave!”

I was glad to be in the air as the tidal wave struck.  The barrier of ice and the wreckage at the beaches did a lot to dampen the wave’s effect, but I watched as the water streamed a good half-mile into the city.  Buildings collapsed, cars were pushed, and even trees came free of the earth.

No cape casualties announced from Laserdream’s armband, at least.

We passed over the Weymouth shopping center.  It had been devastated by Leviathan’s passage, then had largely folded in on itself in the wake of the most recent wave.  From the way the debris seemed to have exploded out the far wall, it didn’t look like Leviathan had even slowed down as he tore through the building.  That wasn’t what spooked me.

What spooked me was that I’d been through the Weymouth shopping center more than a hundred times.  It was the closest mall to my house.

When I sensed Leviathan turning south, towards downtown, I didn’t feel particularly relieved.  There were enough shelters and enough space in the shelters to handle virtually every Brockton Bay resident in the city proper.  From what I remembered, not everyone had participated in the drills that happened every five years or so, choosing to stay home.  It was very possible that some shelters near the residential areas might prove to be over capacity, that my dad, if he arrived late, might have been redirected to another shelter.  One closer to downtown, where Leviathan was going.  I couldn’t trust that he was out of harm’s way.

“He’s at or near BZ-6, heading south.”

The area we were entering had been further from the heroes with the forcefields, where waves hadn’t had their impact softened or diverted by the the PHQ’s forcefield or the larger, heavier, blockier structures of the Docks.  Entire neighborhoods had been flattened, reduced to detritus that floated in muddy, murky waters.  Larger buildings, what I suspected might have been part of the local college, were standing but badly damaged. Countless cars sat in the roads and parking lots with water pouring in through shattered windows.

Laserdream changed course, to follow Lord street, the main road that ran through the city and downtown, tracing the line of the bay.

“What are you doing?” I asked her.

“The wreckage goes this way,” she responded.

I looked down.  It was hard to tell, with the damage already done, the water flooding the streets, but I suspected she was right.  One building that looked like it should have stood against the waves thus far was wrecked, and mangled bodies floated around it.  It could have been the tidal wave, but it was just as likely that Leviathan had seen a target and torn through it.

“Maybe, but he might have been faking us out, or he detoured further ahead,” I said.  I pointed southwest.  “That way.”

She gave me a look, I turned my attention to her armband, tried to discern where Leviathan fell on the grid.  Around the same moment I figured it out, I felt him halt.  “BX-8 or very close to it!  He’s downtown, and he just stopped moving.”

“You sure?” came Chevalier’s voice from the armband.

“Ninety-nine percent.”

“Noted.  We’re teleporting forces in.”

Laserdream didn’t argue with me.  We arrived at the scene of the battle a matter of seconds later.  Familiar territory.

I had been near here a little less than two hours ago.  The skeleton of a building in construction was in view, a matter of blocks away, an unlit black against a dark gray sky.  Beneath that, I knew, was Coil’s subterranean base of operations.

Parian had given life to three stuffed animals that lumbered around Leviathan.  A stuffed goat stepped forward, and sidewalk cracked under a hoof of patchwork leather and corduroy.  A bipedal tiger grabbed at an unlit streetlight, unrooted it, and charged Leviathan like a knight with a lance couched in one armpit.  The third, an octopus, ran interference, disrupting Leviathan’s afterimages before they could strike capes and wrapping tentacles around Leviathan’s limbs if he tried to break away.  Parian was gathering more cloth from the other side of a smashed display window, drawing it together into a crude quadruped shape, moving a series of needles and threads through the air in an uncanny unison that reminded me of my control over my spiders.

Leviathan caught the streetlight ‘lance’ and clawed through the tiger’s chest, doing surprisingly little damage considering that it was just fabric.  After three good hits, the tiger deflated explosively.

The octopus and goat grappled Leviathan while Purity blasted him with a crushing beam of light.  By the time he recovered, Parian was inflating the half-created shape in front of her, so it could stumble into the fray.  She turned her attention to repairing the ‘tiger’.

I was curious about her power.  Some sort of telekinesis, with a gimmick?  She had a crapton of fine manipulation with the needles and threads, that much was obvious, but the larger creations she was putting together – whatever she was doing to animate them with telekinesis or whatever, it left them fairly clumsy.  Did her control get worse as she turned her attention to larger things?  Why manipulate cloth and not something stronger, sturdier?

I wondered if she was one of the capes that thought of what she did as being ‘magic’.  Her power was esoteric enough.

A slash of Leviathan’s tail brought down two of the stuffed entities, and Hookwolf tackled him to ensure the Endbringer didn’t get a moment’s respite.  Leviathan caught Hookwolf around the middle with his tail, flecks of blood and flesh spraying from the tail as it circled Hookwolf’s body of skirring, whisking blades.  Leviathan hurled Hookwolf away.

Browbeat saw an opening, stepped in to pound Leviathan in the stomach, strike him in the knee Armsmaster had injured.  Leviathan, arms caught by Parian’s octopus and goat, raised one foot, caught Browbeat around the throat with his clawed toes, and then stomped down sharply.

Browbeat deceased, BW-8.

Leviathan leaned back hard, making Parian’s creations stumble as they maintained their grip, then heaved them forward.  The ‘octopus’ remanied latched on, but the ‘goat’ was sent through the air, a projectile that flew straight for Parian.

Her creation deflated in mid air, but the piles of cloth that it was made of were heavy, and she was swamped by the mass of fabric.  Leviathan darted forward, held only by her octopus, and the afterimage rushed forward to slam into that pile of cloth.

Parian down, BW-8.

All of the ‘stuffed animals’ deflated.

The girl with the crossbow and Shadow Stalker opened fire, joined by Purity from above.   Laserdream dropped me at the fringe of the battlefield with the Halberd before joining them, flying above at an angle opposite Purity’s, firing crimson laser blasts at Leviathan’s head and face.  Leviathan readied to lunge, stopped as a curtain of darkness swept over him, the majority dissipating a second later, leaving only what was necessary to obscure his head.  It took Leviathan a second to realize he could move out of that spot to see again, a delay that earned him another on-target series of shots from our ranged combatants.  Grue was here, somewhere.

It wasn’t much, I didn’t have many bugs gathered here yet, but I was able to pull some together into humanoid forms.  I sent them moving across the battlefield towards Leviathan.  If one of them delayed him a second, drew an attack that would otherwise be meant for someone else, it would be worth the trouble.

I looked around, trying to find Brandish, Chevalier, Assault or Battery, or even someone tough.  Someone that could take the Halberd and make optimal use of it.

One of crossbow-girl’s shots, like a needle several feet in length, speared under the side of Leviathan’s neck, out the top.  Shadow Stalker’s shots, at the same time, failed to penetrate Leviathan’s hard exterior.

“Flechette!  I’m getting closer!” Shadow Stalker called out, looking back at her new partner.

“Careful!” the crossbow-girl – Flechette, I took it – replied, loading another shot.

Shadow Stalker timed her advance with a pounce on Hookwolf’s part.  Empire Eighty-Eight’s most notorious killer latched onto Leviathan’s face and neck, blood spitting around where the storm of shifting metal hooks and blades made contact with flesh.  Shadow Stalker ran within twenty feet of the Endbringer, firing her twin crossbows.  The shots penetrated this time, disappearing into Leviathan’s chest, presumably fading back in while inside him.

Flechette fired a needle through Leviathan’s knee, and the Endbringer’s leg buckled.  He collapsed into a kneeling position, the knee striking the ground.

Leviathan used his claws to heave Hookwolf off his face, tore the metal beast in half, and then threw the pieces down to the ground, hard.  One landed straight on top of Shadow Stalker, the other almost seemed to bounce, rapidly condensing into a roughly humanoid form before it touched the ground again, landing in a crouch.  Hookwolf backed away, the blades drawing together into a human shape, skin appearing as they withdrew.  He brought his hand over his head and pointed forward at Leviathan.  A signal for the next front-liner.

Shadow Stalker down, BW-8.

I didn’t recognize the next cape to charge in to attack.  A heroine in a brown and bronze bodysuit.  She flew in low to the ground, gathered fragments of rock and debris around her body like it was metal and she was the magnet, then went in, pummeling with fists gloved in pavement and concrete.

You could tell, almost right away, the woman didn’t have much training or experience.  She was used to enemies that were too slow to move out of her way, who focused their attention wholly on her.  Leviathan ducked low to the ground, letting the heroine pass over him, then leapt for Flechette.  In the very last fraction of a second, the girl flickered, and was replaced by the brown-suited cape, who took the hit and stumbled back, fragments of rock breaking away.  Flechette dropped out of the sky where the cape had been, landed hard.  It took her a few seconds to recover enough to fire another bolt at Leviathan, strike him in the shoulder.  Trickster had just spared brown-suit from making a fuck-up that got someone killed.

The boy with the metal skin formed one hand into an oversized blade, as long as he was tall, managed a solid hit at Leviathan’s injured knee as the Endbringer whirled around to face Flechette.

Leviathan slapped the teenage hero down, swiped at one of my swarm-people, then was forced down onto all fours as Purity struck him square between the shoulderblades with a column of light.  A metal shelving unit shot from the interior of a store, Ballistic’s power, I was almost positive, and made Leviathan stumble back.

We had the upper hand, but that wasn’t necessarily a good thing.  More than once, in the past hour alone, the Endbringer had demonstrated that any time the fight was going against him, he’d pull out all the stops and do something large scale.  A tidal wave or tearing up the streets.

We did not have what it took to withstand another wave.  No forcefields, no barriers.

I had one of my gathered swarms explode into a mass of flying insects as they got close enough to Leviathan, make their way against the drenching rain to rise up to Leviathan’s face.  Many clustered in the recessed eye sockets that looked like tears or cracks in his hard scaled exterior.  Others crawled into the wounds other capes had made.

Briefly blinded, he shook his head ponderously, using his afterimage and one swipe of his claw to clear his vision.  He scampered back as his sight was obscured yet again by one of Grue’s blasts.

He lunged forward, stumbling into and out the other side of the cloud of darkness.  A swipe of his tail batted the metal-skinned boy away.  Another strike dispatched Brandish, who was moving in to attack with a pair of axes that looked as though they were made from lightning.

Brandish down, BW-8

Flechette fired one needle into the center of Leviathan’s face, between each of his four eyes.  It buried itself three quarters deep, speared out the back of his head.

He reared back, as if in slow motion, stumbled a little.  His face pointed to the sky.  He teetered.

Yeah, no.  Much as I’d like to to be, there was no fucking way it was going to be that easy.

That top-heavy body of his toppled forward, and it was only his right claw, slamming down to the pavement, that stopped his face from being driven into the ground.  The impact of his claw striking the ground rumbled past us.

The rumble didn’t stop.

“Run!” I shouted, my cry joining the shouts of others.  I turned, sloshed through the water to get away, not sure where to get away from, or to.

Leviathan and the ground beneath him sank a good ten feet, and water swirled and frothed as it began pouring to fill the depression.  He used his arm to shield himself as Purity fired another blast from above.  As the ground beneath him continued to sink, the water lapped higher and higher around him.

The Endbringer descended, and the area around him quickly became a massive indent, ten, fifteen, thirty, then sixty feet across, ever growing.  The force of the water pouring into the crater began to increase, and the ground underfoot grew increasingly unsteady as cracks spread across it.

I realized with a sudden panic, that I wasn’t making headway against the waves and the ground that was giving way underfoot.  The growing crater was continuing to spread well past me, rising above me as the ground I stood on descended.

“Need help!” I screamed, as water began falling atop me from a higher point, spraying into me with enough force that I began to stumble back, fall.

The ground in front of and above me folded into a massive fissure.  The movement of the cracked sections of road created a torrent of water that washed over me, engulfed me and forced me under.  The impact and pain from the force of the water on my broken arm was enervating, drew most of the fight out of me when I very much needed to be able to struggle, get myself  back above the surface.  I tried to touch bottom, to maybe kick myself back up, but the ground wasn’t there.  Feeling out with the pole of the Halberd, I touched ground, pushed, failed to get anywhere.

A hand seized the pole of the Halberd, heaved me up, changed its grip to my right wrist and pulled me up and free of the waves.

When I blinked my eyes clear of water, Laserdream was above me.  She faced the epicenter of the growing depression in the ground, flying backwards.  Her other hand clung to an unconscious Parian.  It seemed like the two of us were too much for her to carry alone, because she hurried straight for a nearby rooftop, carefully lay Parian down.

We hadn’t set down for more than ten seconds before the building shuddered and began to collapse.  The ground beneath the building cracked and tilted, no doubt because the underlying soil and rock was being drawn away by churning water.  The flooding in the streets was diverted into the deepening bowl-shaped cavity Leviathan was creating, filling it.  It was almost a lake, now, three city blocks across and growing rapidly. Only fragments of the taller buildings in the area stayed above the waves; some buildings were already toppled onto their sides, others half-collapsed and still breaking apart as I watched.  Some capes were climbing out of the water and onto the ruined buildings, with the help of the more mobile capes.  Velocity and Trickster were working in tandem, Velocity running atop the water’s surface to safe ground, trickster swapping him for someone who was floundering, rinse, repeat.

As our footing dropped beneath us, Laserdream reluctantly grabbed at my hand and Parian’s belt, hauled us back up into the air.

Above me, her armband flashed yellow.

“Armband!” I called up to her. “Tidal wave?”

“Can’t see unless I drop you,” she responded, over the dull roar of the waves beneath us.  With a bit of sarcasm and harshness to her tone, she asked me, “Do you want me to drop you?”

Right, I’d kind of messed with her cousins at the bank robbery.  She counted me as an ally, here and now, but she wouldn’t be friendly.

Myrddin and Eidolon moved from the coast to the ‘lake’ in the upper end of Downtown.  I saw and sensed Leviathan leap from the water like a dolphin cresting the waves, moving no less than two hundred feet in the air, toward the pair, lashing out with his afterimage in every direction.

I didn’t see how it turned out, because Laserdream carried Parian and me away.  I could sense the Endbringer through the bugs that had made their way deepest into his wounds, the ones that had found spots where his afterimage couldn’t flush them out each time it manifested.  With my power, I could track him beneath the water.  He was moving so fast that it was almost as though he were teleporting, finding the drowning and executing them.

Scalder deceased, BW-8.  Cloister deceased, BW-8.  The Erudite deceased, BW-8.  Frenetic deceased, BW-8.  Penitent deceased, BW-9.  Smackdown deceased, BX-8.  Strider deceased, BW-8

“Setting down again,” Laserdream said.

“But if there’s a tidal wave-”

“I don’t see one.”

I joined her in looking toward the coast.  The water was as stable as it had been since the fight started.

“If it’s a trick-”

With a little anger in her voice, a hard tone, she spoke, “Either we set down or I drop you.  I can’t hold on much longer.”


She carried me two blocks away from the crater.  The ground was wet, but no longer submerged, the road was torn up, shattered, covered with debris.

Laserdream checked her armband, “It’s one of the shelters.  They sprung a leak, need help evacuating.  I’m going.”

Dad.  It could be my dad.

“Bring me,” I said.

She frowned.

“I know your arms are tired.  Mine is too, and I was just hanging there.  I can’t tell you how thankful I am that you’ve done this much to help me, but we have to stick together, and you can fly low enough to the ground that you can drop me if you have to.”

“Fine, but we’re leaving the doll kid here.”

She laid Parian down in a recessed doorway, then pressed the ‘ping’ button on the girl’s armband.

I held the Halberd out while Laserdream walked around behind me.  She wrapped her arms around my chest and lifted us off.  Uncomfortable, and she was jarring my broken arm, which hurt like a motherfucker, but I couldn’t complain after just having asked to come.

Myrddin down, BX-9.

Laserdream carried us around the edge of the ‘lake’ that was still growing, if not quite so fast as it had been.  I saw others gathered at the edge of the water, forming battle lines where Leviathan might have a clear path to make a run for it. If he wanted to make a run for it.  As it stood, he was entirely in his environment, in the heart of the city, where he could continue to work whatever mojo he needed to bring more tidal waves down on our heads.  To my bug senses, Leviathan was deep beneath the waves, moving rapidly, acting like he was engaged in a fight.  Against Eidolon?  I couldn’t tell.  Every darting, hyperfast movement dislodged a few bugs, made him harder to detect.

The shelter was set beneath a smallish library.  A concrete stairwell beside the building led belowground to the twenty-foot wide vault door.  Fragments of the building and the ledge overhanging the stairwell had fallen, blocked the door from opening fully.  Making matters worse, the door was stuck in a partially ajar position, and the stairwell was flooded with water, which ran steadily into the shelter.  Two capes were already present, shoulder deep in the water, ducking below to grab stones and rising again to heave them out.

“What’s the plan?” I asked, as Laserdream set us down, I immediatelly sent out a call to summon bugs to my location, just to be safe.  “Do we want to shut the door or open it?”

“Open it,” one of the capes in the water said.  He ducked down, grabbed a rock, hauled it out with a grunt.  “We don’t know what condition they’re in, inside.”

Laserdream stepped forward and began blasting with her laser, penetrating the water and breaking up the larger rocks at the base of the door.

I was very nearly useless here.  With one hand, I couldn’t clear the rubble, and my power wasn’t any use.  There weren’t even many crabs or other crustaceans I could employ in the water around us, and the ones that did exist were small.

Then I remembered the Halberd.

“Hey,” I stopped one of the capes that was heaving rocks out of the stairwell, “Use this.”

“As a shovel?” he looked skeptical.

“Just try it, only… don’t touch the blade.”

He nodded, took the Halberd, and ducked beneath the water.  Ten seconds later, he raised his head, “Holy shit.  This works.”

“Use it on the door?” I suggested.  He gave me a curt nod.

Enemy location unknown, I could hear the cape’s armband announce.  Defensive perimeter, report.

There was a pause.

No reports.  Location unknown.  Exert caution.

“I’m going to try cutting the door off,” the cape spoke.  He descended beneath the water.  I could barely make out his silhouette.  Laserdream ceased firing as he made his way to where the heavy metal door was, stepped around and set to burning long channels in the side of the stairwell.  I realized it was intended to give the water in the stairwell somewhere to flow that wasn’t towards the people inside.

The door tipped into the stairwell and came to rest against the opposite wall, resting at a forty-five degree angle, sloping up toward the railing.  The water in the stairwell flowed inside, an unfortunate consequence.  The cape with the Halberd set to using the blur of the Halberd to to cut lines into the back of the door and to remove the railing, so there was sufficient traction for people walking up and out of the door.

I stepped down to investigate, sent a few bugs in to get the lay of the land.  The interior of the shelter was surprisingly like what Coil’s headquarters had been like, concrete walls with metal walkways and multiple levels.  There were water coolers and a set of freezers, bathrooms and a sectioned off first aid area.

It was clear that one of the waves or Leviathan’s creation of that massive sinkhole in downtown had done some damage to the shelter.  Water was pouring in from a far wall and from the front door, and twenty or so people were in the first aid bay on cots, injured and bloody.  A team of about fifty or sixty people were moving sandbags to reduce the flow of water into the chamber from the cracked back wall.  A second, smaller team was blocking off the room with the cots, piling sandbags in the doorway.  In the main area, people stood nearly waist deep in water.

“Everyone out!” Laserdream called out.

Relief was clear on people’s faces as they began wading en masse toward the front doors.

My dad was taller than average, and I hoped to be able to make him out, see if he was in the crowd.  As the group gravitated toward the doorway, however, I lost the ability to peer over the mass of people.  I didn’t see him.

I hung back as people filed out in twos and threes.  Mothers and fathers holding their kids, who otherwise wouldn’t be tall enough to stay above water, people still in pajamas or bathrobes, people holding their dogs above water or with cats on their shoulders.  They marched against the flow of water from the stairwell, up the back of the vault door and onto the street.

Mr. Gladly was near the back of the crowd, with a blond woman that was taller than him, holding his hand.  It bugged me, in a way I couldn’t explain.  It was like I felt he didn’t deserve a girlfriend or wife.  But that wasn’t exactly it.  It was like this woman was somone who maybe liked him, heard his side of things, validated his self-perception of being this excellent, ‘cool’ teacher.  A part of me wanted to explain to that woman that he wasn’t, that he was the worst sort of teacher, who helped the kids who already had it easy, and dropped the fucking ball when it came to those of us who needed it.

It was surprising how much that chance meeting bugged me.

A shriek startled me out of my contemplations.  It was quickly followed by a dozen other screams of mortal terror.

Impel deceased, CB-10Apotheosis deceased, CB-10.

I felt him arrive, a small few bugs still inside him, though most of the rest had been washed away in his swim.  There were so few I’d missed his approach.


People ran back inside the shelter, screamed and pushed, trampled one another.  I was forced into the corner by the door as they ran into the shelter, tried to make some distance between themselves and the Endbringer.

Laserdream down, CB-10.

And he was there, climbing through the vaultlike door, so large he barely fit.  One claw on either side, he pushed his way through.  Stood as tall as he could inside the front door, looking over the crowd.  Hundreds of people were within, captive, helpless.

A lash of his tail struck down a dozen people in front of him.  The afterimage struck down a dozen more.

No death notice from the armband for civilians.

Leviathan took a step forward, putting me behind him and just to his right.  He lashed his tail again.  Another dozen or two dozen civilians slain.

Mr. Gladly’s girlfriend was screaming, burying her face in his shoulder.  Mr. Gladly stared up at Leviathan, wide eyed, his lips pressed together in a line, oddly red faced.

I didn’t care.  I should feel bad my teacher was about to die, but all I could think about was how he’d ignored me when Emma and the others had had me cornered.

One hand on my shoulder to steady my throbbing broken arm, I slipped behind Leviathan, hugging the wall, slipping around the corner and moving up the vault door with padded feet.

It was a dark mirror to what Mr. Gladly had done to me.  What Emma and her friends had done, I couldn’t say for sure that I would have had the mental fortitude to put up with it if I hadn’t gotten my powers – and for all he knew, I hadn’t.  I couldn’t know whether I could have dealt with everything that had followed the incident in January, if I could have made it this far if I hadn’t had my powers, these distractions.  In every way that mattered, Mr. Gladly turning his back on me, back there in the school hallway, a time that felt so long ago, could have killed me.

A fitting justice, maybe, leaving him in that shelter with Leviathan.

I saw Laserdream lying face down in the water, bent down and turned her over with my good hand and one foot, checked she was breathing.

The two capes, who I took to be Impel and Apotheosis, were torn into pieces.  I ran past them.  Ran past the civilians who Leviathan had struck down, ripped apart.

I stopped, when I found the Halberd, picked it up.  Found Impel’s armband, bent down and pressed the buttons to open communications, “Leviathan’s at the shelter in CB-10.  Need reinforcements fast.”

Chevalier replied, “Shit.  He must have gone through some storm drain or sewer.  Our best teleporter’s dead, but we’ll do what we can.”

Which left me only one thing to do.  I had to be better than Mr. Gladly.

I ran past Impel and Apotheosis, passed Laserdream, and reached the shelter’s entrance once more.

Leviathan was further inside, crouched, his back to me.  His tail lashed in front of him.  Terrified screams echoed from within.

It was agonizing to do it, but I moved slowly, to minimize the noise I made, even as every second allowed Leviathan more time to tear into the crowd.  To move too fast would alert him, waste any opportunity I had here.  A backwards movement of Leviathan’s tail arced through the air, fell atop me, forcing me down into the water.  Gallons of cold water dropping down from ten feet above me.

I swallowed the scream, the grunting of pain that threatened to escape my throat, stood again, slowly.

With only one hand, I didn’t have the leverage to really swing the Halberd.  I had to hold it towards the top, near the blade, which meant having less reach, having to get closer.

When I was close enough, I drew the blade back and raked it just below the base of his tail.  Where his asshole would be if he had human anatomy.  Easiest place for me to reach, with him crouched down like he was.

Dust billowed and Leviathan reacted instantly, swiped with one claw, fell onto his side when the damage to his buttocks and the hampered mobility of his tail screwed with his ability to control the movement of his lower body.  His claw swipe went high.  His afterimage was broken up by the the wall above the door, but enough crashed down in front of and on top of me to throw me back out of the shelter, into the toppled shelter door.  I was pushed under the water, the Halberd slipping from my grip.

I climbed to my feet at the same time he did, but I had a clear route up the back of the shelter door while he had to squeeze through the opening.  I was on the street and running well before he was up out of the stairwell.

I gathered my bugs to me, sent some to him, to better track his movements.  As he climbed up, I gathered the swarms into decoys that looked human-ish, sent them all moving in different directions, gathered more around myself to match them in appearance.

With the effects of my slash of the Halberd combined with the damage Armsmaster had already done, Leviathan didn’t have the mobility with his tail he otherwise would.  When he attacked my decoys, he did it with slashes of his claw and pouncing leaps that sent out afterimages to crash into them.  A swipe of the claw’s echo to disperse one swarm to his left, a lunge to destroy one in front of him.  Another afterimage of a claw swipe sent out to strike at me.

Water crashed into me, hard as concrete, fast as a speeding car.  I felt more pain than I’d ever experienced, more than when Bakuda had used that grenade on me, the one that set my nerve endings on fire with raw pain.  It was brief, somehow more real than what Bakuda had inflicted on me.  Struck me like a lightning flash.

I plunged face first into the water.  My good arm on its own wasn’t enough to turn me over – the road just a little too far below me.  I tried to use my legs to help turn myself over.  Zero response.

I’d either been torn in two and couldn’t feel the pain yet or, more likely, I’d been paralyzed from the waist down.


Not like I really should’ve expected any different.  Neither case was much better than the other, as far as I was concerned.

My breath had been knocked out of me at the impact, but some primal, instinctual part of me had let me hold my breath.  I lay there, face down in two or three feet of water, counting the seconds until I couldn’t hold my breath any more, until my body opened my mouth and I heaved in a breath with that same instinctual need for preservation, filled my lungs with water instead.

The lenses of my mask were actually swim goggles, it was a strange recollection to cross my mind.  I’d bought them from a sports supply store, buying the useless chalk dust at the same time.  Durable, high end, meant for underwater cave spelunkers, if I remembered the picture on the packaging right.  Tinted to help filter out bright lights, to avoid being blinded by any fellow swimmer’s headlamps.  I’d fitted the lenses from an old pair of glasses inside, sealed them in place with silicon at the edges, so I had 20/20 vision while I had my mask on without having to wear glasses beneath or over it, or contact lenses, which irritated my eyes.  I’d built the armor of my mask around the edges of the goggles so the actual nature of the lenses wasn’t immediately apparent, and to hold them firmly in place.

Even so, when I opened my eyes, looked through those lenses for their original purpose, all I could see was mud, grit, silt.  Black and dark brown, with only the faintest traces of light.  It disappointed me on a profound level, knowing that this might be the last thing I ever saw.  Disappointed me more than the idea of dying here, odd as that was.

Through my power, I sensed Leviathan turn, take a step back toward the shelter, stop.  His entire upper body turned so he could peer to his left with his head, turned the opposite way to peer right.  Like a dog sniffing.

He dropped to all fours, ran away, a loping gait, not the lightning fast movement he’d sported when he first attacked.  Still fast enough.

My chest lurched in a sob for air, like a dry heave.  I managed to keep from opening my mouth but the action, the clenching of every muscle above my shoulders, left my throat aching.

Two seconds later, it hit me again harder.

Two blocks away, Leviathan crashed down into the water.

Another lurch of my throat and chest, painful.  My mouth opened, water filled my mouth, and my throat locked up to prevent the inhalation of water.  I spat the water out, forced it out of my mouth, for all the good it would do.

I’d left the fat cape to die like this when the wave was coming.  Was this karma?

Something splashed near me.  A footstep.

I was hauled out of the water.  I felt a lancing pain through my midsection, like a hot iron, gasped, sputtered.  Through the beads of water on my lenses, I couldn’t make out much.

Bitch, I realized.  She wasn’t looking at me.  Her face was etched deep with pain, fury, fear, sheer viciousness, or some combination of the four.

I followed her gaze, blinked twice.

Her dogs were attacking Leviathan, and Leviathan was attacking back.  He hurled two away, three more leapt in.

How many dogs?

Leviathan pulled away, only for a dog to snag his arm, drag him off balance.  Another latched on to his elbow, while a third and fourth pounced onto his back, tearing into his spine.  More crouched and circled around him, looking for opportunities and places to bite.

He clubbed one away with a crude movement of his tail, used his free claw to grab it by the throat, tear a chunk of flesh away.  The dog perished in a matter of seconds.

Bitch howled, a primal, raw sound that must have hurt her throat as much as it hurt to listen to.  She moved forward, pulling me with her, lifting me up.  When I sagged, she gave me a startled look.

I looked down.  My legs were there, but there was no sensation.  Numb wasn’t a complete enough term to explain it.

“Back’s broken, I think,” the words were weak.  The calm tone of the words was eerie, even coming from my own mouth to my own ears.  Disconcertingly out of place with the frenzied, savage tableau.

Leviathan wheeled around, grabbed another dog by one shoulder, dug a claw into the dog’s ribcage and cracked  it open, the ribs splaying apart like the wings of some macabre bird, heart and lungs exposed.  The animal dropped dead to the water’s surface at Leviathan’s feet.

Bitch looked from me to the dog, as if momentarily lost.  In an instant, that look disappeared, replaced by that etching of rage and fury.  She screeched the words, “Kill him!  Kill!”

It wasn’t enough.  The dogs were strong, there were six of them left, even, but Leviathan was more of a monster than all of them put together.

He heaved one dog off the ground, slammed it into another like a club, then hurled it against a wall, where it dropped, limp and broken.

With that same claw, he slashed, tore the upper half of a dog’s head off.

“Kill!” Bitch shrieked.

No use.  One by one, the dogs fell.  Four left, then three.  Two dogs left.  They backed away, wary, each in a different direction.

Bitch clutched me, her arms so tight around my shoulders it hurt.  When I looked up at her, I saw tears in the corners of her eyes as she stared unblinking at the scene.

Scion dropped from the sky.  Golden skinned, golden beard trimmed close, or perhaps it never grew beyond that length.  His hair was longer than mine.  His bodysuit and cape were a plain white, stained with faded marks of old, dirt and blood, a strange juxtaposition to how perfect and unblemished he looked, otherwise.  There was no impact as he landed, no great splash or rumble of the earth.  Leviathan didn’t even seem to notice the hero’s arrival.

Leviathan struck at one of the remaining dogs with a broad swing of his tail, caught it across the snout.  It dropped, neck snapped.  A short leap and a slash of the claw dispatched the last.

Scion raised one hand, and a ball of yellow-gold light slammed into Leviathan from behind, sent the Endbringer skidding across the length of the street, past Bitch and I.

Leviathan leaped to his feet, reared around, swung his claws at the air ferociously.  Water around him rose, rushed towards Scion, a wave three times as high as Bitch was tall.  Three times as tall as I might be if I could stand.

Scion didn’t move or speak.  He walked forward, and ripples extended from his footsteps, soared past us with some strange motive force.  The ripple touched the wave, and the tower of water collapsed before it got halfway to us, dropping straight down.  Liquid as far as the eye could see was being flattened out into a disquieting stillness by the ripples of Scion’s footsteps, like a great pane of glass.

Leviathan lunged up to the side of a half-ruined building, leaped down to a point three-quarters of the way between himself and Scion.  His afterimage slammed into the hero.

Scion turned his head, shut his eyes, let the water wash over and past him.  When the attack was over, he squared his head and shoulders, facing Leviathan head on, raised a hand.

Another blast of yellow-gold light, and Leviathan was sent sprawling.

I saw the ripples and waves of Leviathan striking the ground wash past us.  Saw, again, how the ripple of Scion’s footstep seemed to wipe out and override that disturbance, returning the water to a perfect flatness.

Leviathan grabbed a car, twisted his entire upper body to toss it in the style of an olympic hammer-throw.  The car hurtled through the air, and Scion batted it aside with the back of one hand.  The vehicle virtually detonated with the impact, falling into a thousand pieces, each piece glowing with golden-yellow light, disintegrating as they splashed into the water.

Scion raised one hand, and there was a brilliant flash, too bright to look through.

When the spots faded from my vision, I saw that one of the damaged buildings was emanating that same light the pieces of the car had, was toppling, tipping towards Leviathan.  Scion, fingertips glowing, started his slow advance as the structure was pulled atop the Endbringer.  The ripples of his footsteps erased any disturbance in the water from the building’s collapse

Leviathan heaved himself out of the rubble, turned to run, only for water to rise and freeze solid in one smooth movement, forming a wall as tall as Leviathan was, a hundred feet long.  He paused for a fraction of a second, to gauge which way he might go, poise himself to leap over.  Scion caught him with another golden-yellow blast before he could follow through.

The movement of the water and the creation of the ice hadn’t been Scion.  Eidolon approached, flying close, raising one hand to create a ragged mess of icicles where Leviathan was to land.  Some impaled the Endbringer, but by and large, they shattered beneath him, left him scrabbling for traction and footing for long enough that Scion could shoot him again, send him through the barrier of ice as though it were barely there, tumbling.

Scion paused, turning to look at Eidolon, his eyes moving past Bitch and me like we weren’t even there.  His eyes settled on the hero, the most powerful individual in the world staring at the man who was arguably the fifth.

His expression was so hard to read.  I knew, now, what people had meant, when they said they thought his face was a mask, a facade.  Though it was expressionless, though there was nothing I could point to to explain why I felt the way I did, somehow I sensed disgust from him.  Like nobility looking at dog shit.

Scion turned away from Eidolon to focus on the enemy once more.  He blasted the Endbringer again.  Floated up and moved past Bitch and me faster than I could see, to strike the Endbringer a fraction of a second after the blast of light struck, stopping there in midair to blast Leviathan a second time as the Endbringer was still flying through the air at the punch’s impact.  Everything about Scion and his actions was utterly silent. His movements or attacks didn’t even stir the air.  Only the effects, Leviathan striking the water, the breaking of ice, generated any movement, shudders or sounds.

Eidolon froze the water around Leviathan’s four claws, giving Scion the opportunity to land another blast.  Leviathan turned, raised a spraying wall of water to cover his retreat.  Scion sent out one blast of his golden light to strike the wave, following up with a second blast before the first even made contact with the water.

Seeing the second blast coming, Leviathan leaped to one side.  No use – the blast of light curved in the air to head unerringly for him, struck him down.  Edges of the Endbringer’s wounds glowed golden yellow, drifted away into the air like flecks of burning paper caught in the updraft of hot air.  A fist imprint near the base of Leviathan’s throat glowed with edges of the same light, the wound continuing to spread and burn as I watched.

A tidal wave appeared in the distance, at the furthest end of the street, near the horizon.

Scion sent out a blast of golden light the size of a small van, darting to the center of the wave, disappearing into a speck of light before it made contact with the distant target.  The middle third of the wave buckled, fell harmlessly into a splash of water, all momentum ceased.  The other two sides of the wave curved inward, bent, to bear unerringly towards us.

Another blast of golden light, and one side was stopped, stalled.  A third blast was spared for Leviathan, who was getting his hands and feet firmly on the ground, crouching in preparation to run.  The Endbringer was knocked squarely to the ground.

Scion stopped the third wave in its tracks with a fourth blast, but the water was still there, and it still bowed to gravity.  The water level around us rose by a dozen feet, momentarily, slopping as gently over us as physically possible, like a lap of water on the beach.

When the flow of water was past us, I could see a fifth blast of light following Leviathan, who had used the cresting water to swim away.  He was making his way to the coast.  Scion rose, flew after his target with a streak of golden light tracing his movement.  Eidolon followed soon after.

Ten, fifteen seconds passed, Bitch holding me, averting her eyes from the corpses of her dogs, jaw set, not speaking or moving.

A teleporter appeared beside Laserdream, a distance away.  He looked at us, startled, glanced at his armband.

“You okay?” he called out.

“No,” I tried to shout back, but my voice was weak.  Bitch spoke for me, “She needs help.”

“Bring her here, I’ll take her back.”

Bitch carried me, dragging me by my collar to where Laserdream lay.  I grunted and groaned in pain, felt those hot pokers through my upper back and middle, but she wasn’t the type for sympathy or gentleness.

The teleporter touched one hand to my chest, another to Laserdream, who turned her head to look at me.

There was a rush of cool air, and we were in the midst of chaos.  Nurses, doctors, moving all around us.  I was lifted and placed on a stretcher, hauled up by four people in white.  There were shouts, countless electronic beeps, screams of pain.

I was placed on a bed.  I would have writhed with the pain of being shifted if it weren’t for my general inability to move.  There was a heart monitor on one side, a metal rack with an IV bag of clear fluid on the other, thick metal poles beside each, stretching from floor to ceiling.  Curtains loomed on either side of me, making for a small room, ten feet by ten feet across. The emergency room, triage or whatever was in front of me, past the foot of the bed, a dozen more cots, doctors doing what they could for the massed injured, civilian and cape alike.

All around me, nurses moved with a rote efficiency, to put a clip on my finger, and the heart monitor started beeping in time with my own heartbeat.  One put some sticky glue on my collarbone, pressing an electrode down there.

“My back, I think it’s broken,” I said, to no one in particular.  Nobody in particular replied.  All of them too busy with set tasks.  People seemed to approach my bedside and leave to go attend to another patient elsewhere.

“Your name?” someone asked.

I looked to the other side of me.  It was an older woman in a nurse’s uniform, pear shaped, gray haired.  A man in a PRT uniform stood behind her, holding a gun on me.

“Skitter,” I replied, confused, feeling more scared by the second.  “Please.  I think my back’s broken.”


I shook my head.  “What?”

“Are you a villain?”

“It’s complicated. My back-”

“Yes or no?” the Nurse asked me, stern.

“Listen, my friend, Tattletale, do you know-”

“She’s a villain,” the PRT uniform cut me off, touching his way through some blackberry device with his free hand.  “Designation Master-5, specifically arthropodovoyance, arthropodokinesis.  No super strength.”

The nurse nodded, “Thank you.  Handle it?”

The man in a PRT uniform holstered his gun and stepped up to the bed.  He grabbed my right wrist, clasped a heavy manacle around it, fixed it to a vertical metal pole by the head of the bed.

“My other arm’s broken, please don’t move it,” I pleaded.

He gripped it anyways, and I couldn’t help but scream, strangled, as he pulled it to one side, clasped a manacle down on my wrist, hooked the other side of the manacle to the second pole.

“What-” I started to ask a nurse, as I forced myself to catch my breath, stopped as she turned her back to me and pulled the curtain closed at the foot of the bed, walked past it.

“Please-” I tried again, looking to the PRT uniform, but he was pushing his way past the curtain, leaving my company.

Leaving me chained up.  Alone.

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118 thoughts on “Extermination 8.5

  1. Well, a nice end to the battle. From a story telling point of view, not so much from the characters point of view.
    Nice of Bitch to show, can’t imagine how she’ll take the deaths of so many dogs.
    To bad no one was able to drive that halbred in the center of the creature.
    And what Scion is so high and might that a little spike trap offends him? Fool! Against a monster like that there is no unhonarble attack! IMO
    There are such things as stupid and unneeded attacks, but I don’t think honor has a place in a fight for the survival against something like these Endbringers.
    Hope Taylor can escape being thrown in jail.
    Nice chapter.

      • It’s probably that Scion sees just about every other hero as monumentally stupid, self-deluded, or plain corrupted infants up to their eyes in all the crap of modern civilization. The guy is saving people 24/7 without bothering with money, politics, human law, the can of worms that is interpresonal relationships, and general interaction with a society as flawed as its creators.
        Besides being practically bugs compared to him power-wise, the other heroes, due to their association with all the above, not only perpetuate the flaws of society in themselves and their actions but only do a (very) small fraction of the good they could be doing.
        Hell, the guy would not have bothered even with clothes or decency in general because, realistically, what need does he have for clothes? And why should he or the victims he saves care that he doesn’t have them? If he cared about decency, the delay in acting as he considered for a fraction of a second about whether to damage them but get the job done might cost lives.

        Now extend that kind of thinking to honor, the legality of crossing national borders, the legality of secret identities (or even no identities), dealing with insurance and damages culpability, private property, a villain’s or suspected villain’s right to privacy, proving crimes you know a villain did in a court of law, freedom of the press to reveal your secret base so the villains can better attack it, politics dictating what problems/villains you’ll deal with and how, religion having an impact on whom you save, economics of saving a guy but destroying a building vs not acting and countless other crap.
        Not to mention occasions where heroes are actively jackasses (Armmaster), contribute to the evil (Glorygirl), support a flawed system (Dragon) and the like.

        All those misgivings we have about such flawed heroes while being flawed ourselves? Multiply them by about a thousand and you might realize what a nigh-perfect, godlike individual who has sacrificed everything civilization had to offer in order to save others would think about other heroes.

      • I agree with Belial. It’s kind of like Scion is the pure hero. He’s Captain America mixed with Superman but who has no “human” to his hero. He has no secret identity, he doesn’t take time off for romance or loved ones or anything, and he probably doesn’t give much of a shit about laws these nations are putting in place that are mostly the result of powered individuals who aren’t as self-sacrificing as himself.

        I mean, Superman still ignores the cries of help and puts on a suit to be a reporter, or takes off the tights to bone his wife. And while he’s saved the entire world, he’s mostly known for being the hero in Metropolis. One city.

        Where’s the heroes saving people from warlords, sex traficking, drug wars, ridiculous Kit Kat flavors in Japan, genocide, and other problems around the rest of the world?

        I mean, are heroes out there making and distributing retrovirals to fight AIDS, handing out food to refugees, working in free health clinics or otherwise doing things to work on real problems?

        I mean, in most comic book universe’s, you gotta figure that most of the world sees superheroes as just caring about the first world if the guys with all the powers and technology are worried about whose robbing a bank.

        • Alexanderwales made the excellent point in his Superman fanfic that Superman essentially massacres people by spending about eight hours of the day working a meaningless job.

          • Then again, everyone who has money and doesn’t give it to charities has a chance to save people and doesn’t do it. Technically, you could call them killers too. But I wouldn’t do that. It just makes people feel bad about themselves without actually making them give more money.
            Remember Panacea? That’s what ends up happening when a cape (besides Scion, who doesn’t seem all that human to me) tries to save everyone.

  2. It would be ridiculous to jail criminals immediately after they helped against an endbringer. It would definately reduce the number that would willingly help. So I have to assume they just lock them up temporarily to protect the medical staff.

    • Nah. No good deed goes unpunished. They probably just make the villains they manage to gather ‘vanish’ and blame it on them dying against the Endbringer.

      • I agree. With the curtains closed and the Vilain unable to move, it is just easy to disapear with him/her.
        And, if the vilain somehow escapes, who will believe that he/she is telling the truth?
        I hope that Taylor has enough bugs around to help her escape.
        It would be better if she stood in the streets with Bitch.
        Remember that when Empire 88´s disguises were uncovered the “heroes” went for the loved ones instead of trying to arest the criminals.
        I imagine a boy of ten, that never did anything bad in life, being kept “in custody” because his father or mother is a supervilain.
        But, I wonder, Taylor has ways of sending messages to other people (bugs forming words), other vilains also have similar abilities.
        The general public will not believe, but vilains will. And, less vilains fighting the endbringers mean more deaths of “good guys”. In the end, a suicidal tactic that will lead to a world with much more vilains than heroes.

      • Not gonna comment too much on this front, but just saying – it was explicitly stated in 4.3 that the villains already outnumber the heroes considerably (roughly two to one).

      • Yes Wildbow I did remember this and why. Powers appear in fight or flight situations and, instead of coming from bandits violence, this kind of situation is coming a lot from things like bullying, abusive fathers … things that lead the new superpowered individual to an angry attitude towards authority.
        Now, if the government makes it worse by betraying the rules of truce and, as a consequence, one in four heroes start to die fighting Endbringers a ratio of two to one can fast become four to one or worst.

    • In fact, there is an informal truce about neither side taking advantage of an Endbringer attack. Nemeses put aside their differences, villains walk free afterwards, no trying to learn X’s secret identity, etc etc. I’m about 80% sure this was mentioned in passing already.

    • They don’t seem like the friendly type. Although it might be a good tool to confuse one of the dumber ones.

      Leviathan is cunning, and Simurgh was stated to be more intelligent, so that leaves Behemoth.

  3. Well the Travellers have helped against an Endbringer before and Taylor’s narration earlier made it sound like it’s a common thing for villains to pitch in. I just think maybe they also get away before the fight is over — Taylor’s in the hospital.

    And then if there’s a trial you need 3 strikes before you go to the Birdcage, right?

    I think Belial’s comment about Scion looking down on other heroes is probably pretty accurate — I saw it as him doing a silent scoffing “Amateurs!” in his head.

    I really liked Taylor’s heroic decision about Mr. Gladly in this one, nicely done. She’s right, her heroism is complicated.

    • Remember the interlude with the popstar metahuman? She didn’t have any strikes and she was guilty of accidental manslaughter at the most. They sent her to the bird cage anyway.

  4. I think the Canary interlude was a case of over-reaction because they believed her voice could control anyone, and didn’t know how to control her. She seemed the exception, not the rule, based on things Taylor has said, especially at the start of this arc when the heroes and villains gathered together to face Leviathan.

  5. Riveting as usual wildbow. I really wish that leviathan had actually gone down. Maybe if scion wasn’t so in love with himself to walk slowly toward the gigantic demon and shown more of a killer instinct it would have happened. I have the feeling that Taylor may be about to majorly freak out. After all wasn’t it a situation like this that caused her powers to manifest in the first place? I’m wondering what will happen now will she have another power break through or just break? This has suddenly turned into a not very pleasant story but it is riveting and really good nonetheless.

  6. Also while this is really not that helpful I came across two errors where it seemed like a word is missing. One near the beginning and one near the end aproximately. I have to go into work soon so I can’t really read over the whole thing again to find them but they are in there somewhere. Maybe from now on I’ll just immediately post when I find something.

  7. Is there an explanation of what the power designations mean? I was surprised that Skitter is only designated a 5. Does that just mean that she can’t change her targets’ physique, the way that Bitch can?

    Canary had an 8…

    • I’d assume the number isn’t meant to analytically measure the strength of someone’s power but rather how big an impact the powers have. Controlling humans can clean house on a scale way beyond what controlling bugs can manage, even if the bug control is more total and easier and whatever.

    • The base designations are labels based on broad categories; they’re initially designed for the PRT teams, and thus break down into very simplistic categories and ratings, so soldiers can know & communicate what they’re up against in brief. If there’s time for a broader explanation, they can then give it.

      ‘Mover’, therefore, covers anyone that can cross great distances at a time. Flight, teleportation, superspeed (Armsmaster uses this designation in 8.2). ‘Master’ refers to the ability to control others or (in the case of specialized cases of other powers, like Tinkers) to create minons… Taylor, Parian, Crusader, Heartbreaker and Nilbog all fit this classification. Bitch is kind of an outlying case in this category because she doesn’t have absolute control or loyalty from those she creates. She has to train them – of the sixteen or so dogs she had at the one shelter, she only considered eight well trained enough to obey her and come with her in this chapter, and even then she was relying on Brutus and Judas to sort of herd them and keep them in line.

      The actual number rating depends on the impact/strength of the power, obviously. It’s perhaps an oversight, perhaps a deliberate action (or some combination of the two) that versatility of a power isn’t counted unless it’s explicit – and Taylor’s isn’t. An example on how this could be deliberate: a PRT squad that moves in on a situation with notice to expect a, say, Shaker-3 that was rated a three only because he’s too much of a dumbass to use his powers to their full potential? They could be really screwed if said Shaker-3 had a fit of inspiration or some guidance/orders from someone that knew what they were doing. So dumbass gets rated a Shaker-5.

      The flip side of the coin, the potential oversight, is that you get the opposite scenario. Taylor gets rated as a Master-5 based on a discussion & analysis of her power & it’s potential on a surface examination, even though she might be 1-2 points higher given her creativity, versatility and other factors that perhaps the heroes aren’t fully aware of (her range, ability to fabricate spider silk, etc). This sort of situation is mitigated by the fact that the PRT squads are instructed to expect the worst case scenarios, to expect that every enemy agent will be operating at peak efficiency, perhaps, but yeah.

      Then there’s also the factor that the bugs she controls are limited in their fashion. She isn’t controlling stuffed animals the size of a second story building like Parian or directing squads of women with machine guns, grenades and zero self preservation like Heartbreaker.

      Canary, had she gone evil, could have started an all out riot, turning any opponent into an ally within moments. Can anyone say whether she might have been able to use televisions, radio, speakers, to get hundreds, thousands, millions of people at a time? That, plus hysteria and the degree of control she appeared to exhibit (making someone mutilate themselves without them breaking free of the compulsion) all got factored into the 8.

      Yes? No? More on designations in 9.1, I suspect. No promises – I haven’t written it – but it’s what I’m thinking.

      • Mein Gott!…Canary could have engulfed the world in Bieber Fever! Maybe they were right to lock her away…

  8. Out of curiosity, how is Leviathan rated? Lung was potentially Brute 9, how does he compare with him? And does the scale max out at 10? I.e. how would Behemoth be classified as a brute?

    • The scale doesn’t max out at 10, but very few individuals actually exceed 10. Leviathan does not exceed 10 on the Brute scale.

      Anyways, I could spend forever dishing out classifications, so I’ll let you guys make your best guesses. Depending on how much interest there is, I may give you your official answers when Arc 10 completes.

      • Not to be technical, but that was actually an amplifier.

        That said, as someone who plays music on electric instruments occasionally, I’ve never had an amp with numbers. I’m sure they exist, but it makes me wonder what’s up with that.

        Maybe I need to buy a more powerful amp if I want numbers. Sadly, I doubt I’d get that past my wife.

      • My bad then. Only saw that clip of it and it was some time ago. Unfortunately, I know nothing about actually playing instruments or the stuff that goes with them, so I can’t help you there.

        Now then, as we all know, studies have recently resurfaced showing LSD can potentially work to alleviate alcohol addiction. It seems we’ve all been misunderstanding for years what AA has meant by putting ourselves in the hands of a higher power…*rambles for 10 minutes, makes fool of self, rinse, repeat*

        • A joke I heard (probably based on Spinal Tap):

          A man walks into an amp store, and asks for an amp that can go to 10.5 rather than just 10.
          A smart amp maker explains that the number is essentially arbitrary, simply designating the amp’s current volume relative to its maximum.
          A wise amp maker says “For an extra $50, I can make it go to 11.”

  9. Given what this world is like, I find myself wondering if they offer the villains the option to turn themselves in and walk away free after participating in defending someplace from Endbringers.

    It would be an incentive to do it as well as taking criminals off the streets. The British did something like that with pirates during the colonial period in US history. The idea being that you won’t be prosecuted for what you’ve done unless you go back to crime after that.

    The medical tent might be a good place to bring it up, and the manacle would be a nice visual reminder of the alternative…

    Not that I see any evidence that this would come up, but the situation made me think about that.

    Manacles remind me of pirates for some reason.

    Ok. It’s definitely time to go to bed now.

    • I was thinking something similar. The wards and protectorate seems to have taken massive losses from Leviathan. So it just makes sense to at least try and recruit younger criminals that can potentially be rehabilitated. If they can fill a few holes in the wards eventually they will filter into the protectorate and the problem is solved.

      • To be fair, she is a villain. She could be lying about the broken arm. Except there’s not much of an insidious reason for her to come to the hospital. They also know her powers, so it doesn’t seem to be so much a thing about protecting the staff. After all, she came to the hospital and appears injured. She doesn’t have superstrength, so she can’t react too violently and they know the cuffs won’t do a thing to restrict her powers, aside from making it impossible for a city’s worth of ants to carry her away.

        My guess is that either someone’s put a special note in her file to detain her if she winds up there (Talk to the hand, Armsmaster), or at the end of the day she’s NOT free to go.

        Alternatively, the specific officer could be a jerk and there might be a doctor on the way who’ll cuss him out and release the patient.

        They’d better hurry. Paraplegia seems to be the only symptom we know of. If she was hit hard enough to break her back (Take that, Batman. You got paralyzed by a drugged up luchador, Taylor by a walking apocalypse) then we might have spine fragments floating all kinds of places, potentially worse internal damage to organs caused by the blow, or even internal bleeding. See, normally your body lets you know if something’s up with a little dose of pain. Unfortunately, Taylor can’t feel that right now.

        I must reiterate what I’ve said previously about making a character I can feel for, Wildbow. I feel like if something goes bad, I would want to write something to cross over and cause some havoc of my own to help her out. I doubt I’d be alone. Watch your step, PRT, or you’ll wind up in that hospital next, with a bad case of boot colon and recto-cranial inversion, followed by shoelung, hardball, paranoid pomeranea, POW’s finger, and mood poisoning.

      • Well if recruiting is the plan I doubt it is going to be the job of the PRT soldiers. Presumably it would be an amnesty for joining us thing, and it would almost certainly be offered by surviving members of the protectorate (or whoever liases for them) for adults, or the lady in charge of the Wards from that interlude in the case of the kids.

      • Related to this, my comment above was basically a question/speculation.

        What seems most likely is that the PRT guy is following procedure as opposed to making sensible choices of his own.

        There’s no logical reason to manacle someone with paralysis and a broken arm while simultaneously leaving that person’s actual (mentally based) powers completely untouched. If they were afraid of her, they should have sedated her because she’s obviously no threat physically.

        Despite the irrationality, I could easily see it as a policy for an organization that has to keep medical personnel free from threats while serving potentially homicidal patients.

  10. “Leviathan leaped to hsi feet” should be “Leviathan leaped to his feet”.

    By the way, why is Leviathan a “he”? Why not at an “it”?

    • You’re not the only one to comment on the gendering of Leviathan.

      In short? Convenience of language, and there’s a kind of security in humanizing an inhuman threat, the same way one gives names to hurricanes.

      • Makes sense… I didn’t mean to beat a dead horse; I’ve read through the story, but past comments — well, my copious free time isn’t *that* copious.

      • I didn’t mean that, when I mentioned past comments – in fact, I think it was brought up via. instant messenger.

        Only meant to state that you’re not alone in thinking that way.

  11. *still rereading, and having a total blast*

    Sometime shortly after the heroes teleport in, it seems Laserdream left Skitter with the Halberd on the ground, but it’s not mentioned in the text. Maybe add a sentence somewhere?

  12. I was glancing at the Web Serial Novel page on TvTropes, and this story stood out. I’ve been obsessively reading it ever since. I got this far, and thought I should leave a comment.

    And I must say, Wow. This is an incredible story.

    A questions: (if you pay attention to comments on old posts) In this universe, did 9/11 happen? Because, with all the flying heroes, it would be hard for terrorists to hold a hijacked plane very long. But, on the other hand, the terrorists might have access to superpowers, giving them an alternate way to attack.

    One issue with this story, which was slowly pushing at my willing suspension of disbelief, was how tame it was. If my memory is correct, the only people who died in any fights were a few nameless mooks killed by EEE in the battle with Lung. (you might count the cameraman Purity killed, also)

    Plenty of capes were villainous enough to kill people, some even got very close to doing it, but they never succeeded. It stopped coming across as a universe where villains were careful to avoid antagonising the enemy, and started feeling like a story where fate intervened to protect every named character.

    But then this arc happened. An arc which contained a scoreboard of dead and unconscious capes, destroying the sole reservation I had with your story. The only way you could ruin that is if every single hero had pulled a Taylor, and lost connection without dying.

    Cheers, 🙂

    • I don’t think this is a spoiler, since it refers to things that by their nature didn’t happen and have no effect on the story:

      According to TV Tropes, 911 did not happen in Wormverse. Similarly, Hurricane Katrina either didn’t happen or the aftermath wasn’t nearly as bad (can’t remember which). Parallel universe baby!

  13. *Laserdream changed course, to follow Lord street, the main road that ran through the city and downtown, tracing the line of the bay.*
    -*street* should be capitalized
    *Parian had given life to three stuffed animals that lumbered around Leviathan.*
    -One thing stood out to me through this scene; we are never told how large they are, even comparatively speaking. Is that intentional?
    *trickster swapping him for someone who was floundering, rinse, repeat.*
    -Capitalization on Trickster
    *It was like this woman was somone who maybe liked him, heard his side of things, *
    -Someone is missing the e

    Two personal notes:
    1) Re reading the part where Bitch watched her dogs get wiped out brought tears to my eyes, that must have been awful for her.
    2) I should have been reading the comments much earlier than when I started (Snare arc, I believe, is when I started reading them), because the information on the classifications is priceless (not to mention other tidbits you unveil)

  14. Now wondering if Leviathan is an organic robot, either controlled via commands/AI routines, or piloted. Either could explain the sudden changes in behavior and sudden disregard for old injuries. Maybe something like Bitch’s dogs inside her powered dogs being teleport-switched with other, unharmed dogs.

    A few editing notes about word choice:

    ” Floated up and moved past Bitch and me faster than I could see”
    Floated doesn’t fit with high speed.

    “Water crashed into me, hard as concrete, fast as a speeding car.”
    While what you’ve written suggests that Taylor has a superhuman pain tolerance and a body that can take superhuman punishment, stress, and activity durations, an impact by a speeding car suggests faster than 55mph – which would split her in half even in her costume.

    “Entire neighborhoods had been flattened, reduced to detritus that floated in muddy, murky waters.”
    Detritus = pile of silt / rubbed off
    Debris = pile of rubble / broken off

  15. Couple of points to raise here:

    1. Why doesn’t Eichilon copy Scion’s abilitiles?

    2. Scion is an idiot, he should not be spending time stopping landslides, he should be curing world hunger or stopping poverty, http://www.smbc-comics.com/?id=2305 Curing actual long term issues instead of focusing on random irrelevant short term, you can change human nature to make them stop killing each other, better than stopping rocks falling.

    3. It seems like it made no sense to defend the city, they should have abandoned it, let Scion come and let civilians die. Since every hero is worth a civilian a thousand times over the death of say 75 heroes if they started with 100 is just an absurd loss. Not only does it let villains everywhere kill more civilians while the capes are distracted, it means in future battles there will be 25 capes to fight off another Endbringer. Even assuming the city is the size of New York that’s only another 9 million people, and it’s not close to that size.

    4. Shouldn’t Taylor be able to control fish, it said she could control a crab which is not an insect because it had a small brain, fish have small brains. There are probably a couple micro-organisms with neurons too. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_animals_by_number_of_neurons A cockroach has 1 million

    “Surprisingly, we’re finding
    some answers to that question by studying the tiny, 10,000-neuron brains of the developing Danio rerio, commonly known as the zebrafish. “

    • 1. He doesn’t copy powers. Not saying any more.

      2.Can’t answer your question, you’ll find out later so it would be spoilers.

      3.The only reason heroes and villains are tolerated is that they will fight Endbringers regardless of the constant casualties, nevermind the horrific implications of leaving millions of civilians to die every few months.

      4. Pretty sure its that she controls all arthropods, not small-brained beings.

    • I’ll try to answer your questions as best as I can, without spoilers I hope.

      1. To put it simply, Eidolon’s power is something like bringing new powers out of nowhere, not copying powers.
      2. Scion isn’t exactly an idiot, he just doesn’t understand how to solve such problems. Put yourself in his shoes for a second, and keep in mind that the Saturday Morning Breakfast Cereal solution wouldn’t have worked.
      3. You are assuming that A: the capes are worth a thousand civilians, B: there is a place to evacuate the civilians to, and C: the voters would be willing to elect a President/Prime Minister/etc who saved a couple dozen capes by sacrificing a city and thousands to millions of civilians. And the death toll is more like 25% than 75%, from what they said earlier.
      4. So do reptiles, and birds, and dogs. It all depends on the boundary line between “small brain” and “large brain” is defined. I think that the thing is more connected to brain structure than brain size. In addition, you have to recognize two things: First, Taylor doesn’t understand her power perfectly (for instance, why is the range expanding?), and second, superpowers tend to be a bit arbitrary at times. Later, Taylor meets a villain who can control birds and set them on fire (the details elude me, but I seem to recall they emerged unharmed); why can’t he do the same to bats, or for that matter humans?

    • There’s a bit of a Catch-22 in that any hero who would stay away because they considered themselves more important than scores of civilians isn’t much of a hero.

      Also, remember that they had no idea if Scion would come or not.

  16. I would have given a lot to see Lung and Baduka in this battle, or war really. Pity they weren’t but I partially understand why. Although the idea of bringing out the hardcore villains from The BirdCage for something so big would be realistic in a sense. Subdueing them as easily as they’re doing with the others not so much.

    Since I like to read a little deep into characters, I’m at a point where I agree that Scion cannot be classified as even a parahuman. He’s the King of Kings isn’t he? I doubt his look was as bad as Skitter claimed it was. I could be wrong, but he’s a healer who heals 24/7, even if he has the attitude of thinking he’s better, then fine. She’s judgy to the point of annoying sometimes, our Taylor. And her priorites are warped. Dude, you’re trapped with over a hundred people in the biggest war you’ve ever witnessed, the highest deathtoll you’ve seen and the worst no-way-out situation you’ve ever been in (after your three week stint as a criminal might I add) and all you can think is “Mr. Gladly is SUCH an asshole, I HATE him wah wah?” Are you kidding me? The biggest bully is in the room kicking ass so get a grip and forget about Emma and how unfair your teacher was. Seriously, if there was EVER a time for her to let go without the “Oh he wasn’t like that but I WILL BE LIKE THAT because I’m so much better” it was then. And then she judges Scion for giving someone a look. Jeez! This girl drives me nuts but I still love her.

    A lot of the ones I’ve liked hit the deceased list and that made me pause long enough to sniffle a little. Now I’m off to read more… because I can’t seem to stop. 😀

    • Now, see, I thought that was a great little touch. It shows that she’s *human*. We’re irrational beings. Teenagers all the more so. And I think I’ve read that during time of immense stress / trauma the mind picks up on little irrational things to focus on, perhaps as distractions. And it offered a nice temptation to revenge, a nice opportunity to show her morality, tying in with the question she gets asked later about which side she’s on.

      And, yes, her motives weren’t entirely altruistic. I don’t know about you but I find when I do good things my motives aren’t always clear-cut either. And you know what? That doesn’t matter. It’s what you end up doing that matters, not how much you agonised about it internally.

  17. Setting a precedent that villains who help against endbringers get locked up is not a good way to make sure villains continue to help against endbringers.

  18. Comma separating two sentences: “The lenses of my mask were actually swim goggles, it was a strange recollection to cross my mind.”

    Missing period: “The ripples of his footsteps erased any disturbance in the water from the building’s collapse”

  19. First of all, just noticed something amusing.

    “You know what he is physically capable of. I want to be clear that despite the image he might convey, he is not stupid, and he can display a level of cunning and tactics that can and will catch you off guard.”

    Straight from Legend’s pre-battle speech. Great job, Armsmaster. Great job.
    Best. Foreshadowing. Ever.

    Second, “A metal shelving unit shot from the interior of a store, Ballistic’s power, I was almost positive, and made Leviathan stumble back.”

    Didn’t Ballistic die already? Or at least go down?

    Found it. 8.3, “The Armband spoke. Losses are as follows: Debaser, Ascendant, Gallant, Zigzag, Prince of Blades, Vitiator, Humble, Halo, Whirlygig, Night, Crusader, Uglymug, Victor, Furrow, Barker, Elegance, Quark, Pelter, Snowflake, Ballistic, Mama Bear, Mister Eminent, Flashbang, Biter…

    The names kept coming. I almost wanted to cover my ears, but not knowing for sure was worse.

    …Cloister, Narwhal, Vixen, The Dart, Geomancer, Oaf, Tattletale…”

    Oh, right. It never mentioned whether it was serious. Still, good news for Tattletale, then.

  20. This is story has been great so far, but this chapter doesn’t make any sense unfortunately. Any villain caught while fighting an Endbringer would have to be given amnesty and medical aid while recuperating. Otherwise you remove any incentive the bad guys have to help out in the first place, thus increasing the chance of failure.

    This should be obvious and I am disappointed that the author hasn’t thought about it.

  21. Small thing: It doesn’t make sense that he goes from BZ-4 to BZ-6 if he is heading Northwest.
    “He’s at or near BZ-6, heading south.” Any standard grid would have A and 0 towards NW. I should sleep and not read. Also I have used too many maps.

    • He’s heading West-by-Northwest, not NW. He didn’t cross a grid square in the northward direction. He also changed directions several times.

  22. Wow, what a ride this story has been so far. I came across Worm via someone’s comment on reddit, and now I find myself reading non-stop.

    At the beginning, it reminded me of “Kill Bill 1” a little, because of Bakuda and Oni Lee. Now, with Leviathan, it was more like Evangelion, with Levy playing the part of the inexplicable angels coming from who knows where to destroy us all while fighting against a band of almost dysfunctional misfits. And now Taylor is paralytic and chained… What next???

  23. Now that I’ve thought of Clockblocker, here is my preferred plan for dealing with this creature:
    – pre-position lots of Clockblocker-weight concrete blocks around the place
    – any random superstrength flying creature to drop a block onto the creature
    – Trickster to swap Clockblocker with a block, wait briefly while the creature is blocked, and then swap him back
    – flying creatures to cover its head, and as much as is convenient, in sticky orange goo
    – details tbd, to either weight down, or hold up the tail
    – when it’s vulnerable, cut off the tail with any handy weapon

    – rinse and repeat for each limb

    This level of boring-and-safe is probably incompatible with wanting to be a hero.

    • It wouldn’t be very boring or safe for Clockblocker. Getting close enough to freeze him just once knocked him out cold and almost got him drowned.

    • As I recall, the paranoia was more that there might be tracking devices in it (at least, that was the case with Kid Win’s cannon). And there quite possibly *are* tracking devices I the Halberd (which will be useful now it’s lost).

  24. Typo Alert: I believe the first “to” should be an “it” in this sentence: “Much as I’d like to to be, there was no fucking way it was going to be that easy.”

    • There’s two instances of “to to” on this page. I found the second one searching to see if the first had already been reported…

  25. There are some places that contain a double space in the middle of the sentence. Are those worth pointing out as typos? Example: “get myself back above the surface.” Between “myself” and “back.”

    I love this work. It’s also very cool how you can crowdsource the editing to all your motivated readers!

  26. One thing I’m surprised they didn’t at least try is weaponising the teleporters. Eidolon can teleport a dozen supers. Maybe he could teleport Leviathan to somewhere with better containment (that’s if he can’t teleport him straight into orbit). Or teleport bombs directly to Leviathan (maybe some of Bakuda’s leftovers?).

    At the very least, have him transporting rocket launchers (or better yet the tinker equivalents) to arm the relatively weak heroes like Skitter.

    Given how sudden Leviathan attacks generally are the standard response plan for him should be teleporters + heavy firepower…

  27. Going through a full re-read of the story. Of all the moments I looked forward to, Bitch ordering her dogs, “Kill! Kill him!” definitely ranks for me as the #1 most powerful, moving moment in the first eight arcs.

  28. Damn. This is enormous.
    Mr. Gladly was a great series of moments. Excellent way to indirectly tie Taylor’s powered and nonpowered lives together, just enough to resonate without crashing into each other.
    Bitch came back. She knew she didn’t stand a chance, she had to know. Or… maybe she didn’t. I think that might be worse, if she didn’t understand she was killing her friends for nothing.
    Still. She came back. And then…
    What the hell is Scion’s actual deal? He clearly thinks a lot of humanity- or is an enormous masochist, to spend all the time in the world helping them- but the look Taylor described, and the way he just stood there while the dogs died…
    And. There’s a horrible kind of sense to what happened at the end. Like, yeah, she showed up to help and that’ll be factored in later, but… later. Right now there are a ton of dangerous parahumans in containable condition for the first time in ages. You’d have to be insane not to at least try and use that to improve the world.

  29. “It seemed like the two of us were too much for her to carry alone, because she hurried straight for a nearby rooftop, carefully lay Parian down.”

    Should be “to carefully lay Parian down.”/”and carefully laid Parian down.”?

  30. >get myself back above the surface.

    Two spaces.

    >trickster swapping him for someone who was floundering, rinse, repeat.

    T not capitalised.

    >I immediatelly sent out a call to summon bugs to my location


    >Gallons of cold water dropping down from ten feet above me.

    This doesn’t work as an independent sentence; it could be a part of the last sentence, though.

    >His afterimage was broken up by the the wall above the door

    The the.

    >dug a claw into the dog’s ribcage and cracked it open

    Double space.

    >Scion didn’t move or speak. He walked forward,

    He didn’t move, but he walked?

    >The ripples of his footsteps erased any disturbance in the water from the building’s collapse

    Missing a full stop.

    >send him through the barrier of ice as though it were barely there, tumbling.

    Not a grammatical error per se, but ‘send him tumbling through the barrier of ice as though it were barely there’ would communicate better.

    • Pretty messy chapter, editing-wise; I’ll make a follow-up comment on the next major action chapter, I suppose. It’s occurred to me before, but I wasn’t bothering with making these posts until I saw the author responding positively to comments in the same vein.

  31. Second read through, the gritty slaughter of bitch’s dogs still makes me a little weepy. That’s the point where I first felt like ‘oh fuck this can’t be taken back’ because obviously tattletale wasn’t dead. That’s really the perfect moment for scion to turn up. Skitter’s passive relating things to her newfound disability is also really strong writing. This whole arc is just filled with insightful phrasing that keeps up with the strong plot.

  32. I get a little miffed every time Taylor whines about how terrible Mr. Gladly is. In the hallway incident, didn’t she, moments before, tell him clearly not to get involved? And then she hates him for not getting involved? I guess it’s just a teenager thing.

    • He deliberately didn’t do ANYTHING when it was obvious something bad was happening. Imo, he should have been fired.

    • Not quite. She told him going to the main office would be ineffective and make the bullies hate her more, which he somehow *interpreted* as not wanting any help at all, and even smiled as he ignored her plight (sad smile but still). Taylor is absolutely right to despise him.

  33. Rereading. I think you mentioned that you wanted people to comment if they found errors. I’m pretty sure “Mine is too”is an error, since she still has both arms.

  34. Re-read, noticed this chapter mentioned Scion’s outfit is stained. Doesn’t that contradict a later description regarding an aspect of his power and his outfit specifically? (Feel free to delete this comment to avoid unnecessary spoilerage)

  35. Ooh one of the first very straightforward Spelling Mistakes I seem to be the first to catch;

    “The ‘octopus’ remanied latched on” should say “remained”.


    • And again, some inconsistency in the italicization of armband messages, specifically I had noted Apotheosis’s CB-10 designation as unitalicized.

  36. This grabbed me the first two times I read through the story, but I’ve decided that if it grabs me three times, takes me out of the moment, it’s at least important enough to share.

    WBZ are the call letters of a TV station in Boston (which would reach Brockton Bay, if it were A> anywhere near Brockton, or B> anywhere between Boston and Plymouth, as explicitly stated somewhere or other. Also, a radio station, but the TV station happens to be Channel 4. It’s the local CBS Affiliate, and it was the local NBC affiliate before that.

    Nowadays, I don’t think we think much about call letters or channel numbers, I certainly don’t, since I stream all my TV, but I’m old enough that “BZ-4” is instantly recognizable. I think anyone who has lived anywhere near where Brockton Bay would be (I have looked at maps and there literally is no room for it. Thus: The worm universe has either slightly different physical geography, or slightly different political Geography. The latter is a given, anyway, since in there’s no Brockton Bay in the real world.)

    It’s an odd coincidence, and I don’t know if it’s a good thing or a bad thing, for the story. I imagine there aren’t *that* many Boston-area natives of age to have the instant response I had.

  37. Wow, that was a rush.

    I got a few goosebumps when it was announced that an Endbringer was on its way, with a name like that and the fact that there were heroes and villains uniting under the same banners. I figured after the prep sequence, the quarter of the forces that would die would be throwaway names, out-of-town or low-level capes that only had really been mentioned in passing. Man, was the Leviathan ruthless.

    I actually think it’s pretty incredible that I got attached enough to characters like Dauntless, Aegis and Kaiser that I was actually a bit sad when they bit the dust. Perhaps I should chalk it up to the majority of stories I’ve read only killing established characters as plot points or for shock value. At the same time, those moments really were meaningful to the story; I could feel the dread that some of these capes were no doubt feeling, the terror of facing down such a beast. This is probably the best story I’ve read in a long time, and if I had better memory, I might be able to claim it to be the best I’ve ever read.

    In any case, I’ll probably kill a lot more of my free time in the coming days/weeks until I’ve finished, and I don’t think I’ll have any regrets.

    Also, this story was brought to my attention by the work of Sandara on deviantart:

    Awesome stuff!

  38. (Might be a double post, not sure)

    Wow, that was a rush.

    I got a few goosebumps when it was announced that an Endbringer was on its way, with a name like that and the fact that there were heroes and villains uniting under the same banners. I figured after the prep sequence, the quarter of the forces that would die would be throwaway names, out-of-town or low-level capes that only had really been mentioned in passing. Man, was the Leviathan ruthless.

    I actually think it’s pretty incredible that I got attached enough to characters like Dauntless, Aegis and Kaiser that I was actually a bit sad when they bit the dust. Perhaps I should chalk it up to the majority of stories I’ve read only killing established characters as plot points or for shock value. At the same time, those moments really were meaningful to the story; I could feel the dread that some of these capes were no doubt feeling, the terror of facing down such a beast. This is probably the best story I’ve read in a long time, and if I had better memory, I might be able to claim it to be the best I’ve ever read.

    In any case, I’ll probably kill a lot more of my free time in the coming days/weeks until I’ve finished, and I don’t think I’ll have any regrets.

    Also, this story was brought to my attention by the work of Sandara on deviantart:

    Awesome stuff!

  39. «sealed them in place with silicon» I think you meant “silicone”. Silicon is a grey semi-metal. Silicone is sold as waterproof calk, especially good on glass.

  40. Is this a mistake? Skitter’s lungs filled with water, and then they.. didn’t.

    “until my body opened my mouth and I heaved in a breath with that same instinctual need for preservation, filled my lungs with water instead.”

    “Another lurch of my throat and chest, painful. My mouth opened, water filled my mouth, and my throat locked up to prevent the inhalation of water. I spat the water out, forced it out of my mouth, for all the good it would do.”

  41. I do not understand the co-ordinate system. At the beginning, it was CD-5 all the time. Now, Leviathan moves a few blocks, and the co-ordinates change. Leviathan was staying in place during the first part of the battle?

  42. Sadly Capes.with names.leqving me really curious, like Apotheosis and the erudite, die without me knowing more.

    Also the end of this.once again shows you like to write dark and.depressed. 😉

    • I still hold out hope for the survival of Woebegone. Hero? Villain? Who were they, what were there powers? What inspired their name?

  43. Typo

    “where waves hadn’t had their impact softened or diverted by the the PHQ’s forcefield”

    Repeated “the”

  44. Another typo:

    His afterimage was broken up by the the wall above the door, but enough crashed down in front of and on top of me to throw me back out of the shelter, into the toppled shelter door.

    Repeated “the”

  45. I really hope this is a hint of what is to come and not a fairly major oversight in what is a pretty good book with small details. After Laserdream puts Skitter down to go face Leviathan she still gets updates about the dead or downed people in the battle despite not having a working armband. I could have overlooked that saying maybe Armsmaster’s halberd somehow had a device built in despite him only completing it that day and it being said to be cramped for space, or she somehow heard someone else’s armband nearby, though I’m not entirely sure how plausible that is with all the noise that the fighting is sure to create along with the apparently constant rainfall or whatever going on and no one being described to be close to her.

    However neither of those can be said to be the case when she enters the shelter afterwards and Leviathan once again appears and yet we see notifications about the other capes outside being downed. I’m really hoping this is Skitter picking up these alerts somehow from her insects or that I overlooked a part somewhere where her armband started back alerting her about downed people or her snatching another one from someone.

    Anyhow, still loving the story. Onward march!

  46. Their treatment only bristles me because Taylor’s a kid. About 15, and from the look of it, a lot of “villains” and heroes are, in fact, kids. No one’s been giving a second thought to them in any situation.
    Also unsure why Taylor didn’t lie right there and just say hero. I saw what was coming the second the nurse asked.

  47. The comment section’s take on Scion is so much fun, reading it in the unimaginably-distant future year of 2018 (we have robotic flying cars now).

  48. I was thinking that Armsmaster’s speech at Leviathan and some of his choreography were suspiciously shonen for a world with basically no Japan. Then I realized…he’s Vegeta. He gets a chance to beat up the big bad and gets some licks in, motivated by hubris, but just ends up jobbing and buying a little time for Goku Scion to show up and save the day.
    Not sure what that makes Eidolon, though.

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