Queen 18.6

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Help is on the way,” Miss Militia’s voice came over the armband.

“Three Vistas,” I said.  “And Noelle is probably north of our location, going after-”

“Skitter!”  Tattletale shouted, interrupting me, “lose it!”


“The armband!  Toss it!”

I pulled at the straps.  As I gathered bugs onto the armband to get a better sense of what I needed to do with the straps, I could tell that the entire thing was swelling, distorting.  I could hear the screen crack.

I pulled it free and threw it, simultaneously climbing to my feet and scrambling away.

“Grue!  Cover it!”  Tattletale shouted.  “Use your power on anything that one breaks down!”

Grue threw out a stream of darkness, then dissolved the darkness that wasn’t covering the area where the armband had been.  Without the ability to see, I had only my bugs’ senses to go by, but I could track where he’d laid down the darkness by the way the air seemed thicker.

From Tattletale’s words, I’d expected an explosion, but it simply twisted away into wisps of thick smoke.

“It’s radioactive,” Tattletale intoned.  “Everything she’s dissolving like that.”

“Unless I cover it?” Grue asked.

“Unless you cover it.  Should cancel out the effects.  But you did want me to let you know when I’m making an educated guess.  This is one of them.” Tattletale said.  “I hope I’m right.  We could win this fight and still wind up dying in a hospital bed a few years from now, because we got too close as that stuff dissolved.”

Oh shit.

“Doesn’t matter, does it?” Regent said.  “World’s ending in a few years anyways.”

“Let’s avoid the extreme radiation poisoning,” I said.  “Regardless of whether the world’s ending or not.”

The other Undersiders and the Chicago Wards were out of the van, and we were collectively backing away from the nega-Vistas.  More specifically, we were retreating from the one who was creating the radioactive dust.

The first one I’d noticed was still on the rooftop, spreading out her efforts, thinning walls and twisting supports.  Her progress was slow, but I was willing to bet that half of the city block would be collapsing onto us in a matter of minutes.  If not sooner.  If I had to guess, her power operated in a different manner than the original Vista’s.  It affected a wider area, it was slower, and she didn’t seem to be suffering for our presence.

The bugs that I was sending her way were having a hard time approaching.  They kept veering around so they flew clockwise around her instead of straight.  I had only a few bugs attacking her, but the same effect that I’d seen with her face had hardened her skin and there weren’t many places left to attack.  Her mouth was little more than a lipless slit across the lower half of her face, firmly closed, and only the smallest bugs could get at her eyes.  She barely flinched at the bites and stings my swarm was delivering.

Meagre as my efforts were, they still should have left her blind, filling her eye sockets with ants and no-see-ums, but her power was still steadily working on the buildings around us.  Another peculiarity of her abilities?  The ability to sense the layout of whatever structures she was affecting?  Did that extend to sensing us?

The second one had arrived, creating footholds and handholds to ascend the section of road she’d raised into a vertical wall, twelve feet high.  She was now perched on top, crouching.  In the time that it had taken me to lose the armband, she had started to work on cutting off our best avenue of retreat.  The road we’d traveled on to get here was raising behind us, bulging upward into a similar barrier.  As far as I could tell, her powers were most in line with the regular Vista, and she seemed to be reacting most to the bites and stings.  I wished that would make me feel more confident about these circumstances.

That left the freakishly tall one.  The Vista with limbs that zig-zagged, who was apparently turning matter into radioactive dust.  She’d climbed past the wreckage of the fallen building and now stood on solid ground again, facing us.

“We off the radioactive one first?” Tecton suggested.

“No,” I said.  I used my bugs to draw an arrow in the air.  “Priority’s the one on the roof, over there.”

“There’s a third one?” he asked.

Apparently he hadn’t caught my message to Miss Militia.

“She’s going to bring down more buildings if we don’t take her fast,” I said.

“Raymancer,” Tecton ordered, “handle it.”

Raymancer stood like he had before, feet together, one arm extended.  I didn’t sense any energy blast or ray from his hand.  The Vista didn’t act as though she’d been shot either.

“She bends light!?”  Wanton asked.

“She’s bending space,” Tattletale said.  “You won’t get a straight shot.”

“Don’t need one,” Raymancer said.  His second shot left a shallow crater in the Vista’s chest.  She sprawled onto the roof, hands pressed to the injury.

The thinning of the walls didn’t stop.

“How the fuck does that work?” Regent asked.  “The laser didn’t even-”

“She’s still alive!” I called out, interrupting him.  There was a small explosion as  Raymancer directed a shot at the Radioactive Vista and missed.  I could sense how the barrier behind us abruptly stopped growing and how the space to one side of her warped to let her evade more easily.

“Vista to our three o’clock is assisting her!” I said.

“Grace!” Tecton shouted.  “Leaving rooftop to you!  Launch!”

Grace leaped toward him, onto the back of one outstretched hand.  She had no trouble maintaining her balance as she placed the other foot on the back of his other gauntlet.

She bent her knees, and extended them to jump in the same instant the piledriver attachments on the gauntlets extended with explosive force.

Most of the bugs I’d placed on her were torn free by the force of the wind ripping past her, as she turned into a human projectile.  She had to have used her selective invincibility to augment her feet and legs so they weren’t annihilated by the piledrivers, and she would be using her enhanced agility to ensure she stuck the landing.

Except the landing wasn’t going to happen as planned.  If I’d understood what they’d planned, I would have warned her.  Her trajectory shifted as she ran into the rooftop-Vista’s power.  Grace fell short of reaching the rooftop.  Very short.  She hit the ground with both feet together, arms spread, and left a shallow crater around her impact site, a half-block away from the building.  Grace was running toward her target a heartbeat later, unhurt.

Some of the flying capes that had been assigned to watch over us were targeting the Vista on the rooftop, and I saw that as excuse enough to focus on other, more immediate problems.

Rachel and her dogs went for the Vista to our right, with Regent doing what he could to hamper their target’s movement, forcing her to use her power to maintain the distance from the beasts.

Which left the rest of us to face off against the radioactive one.

“One on the rooftop’s occupied,” I said.  “Now we can fight her.”

She extended her hand toward us, and the ground between us and her bulged, as though a cartoon mole had crawled beneath the pavement.  Raymancer fired at her, clearly hoping to distract her, but each shot missed by a fair margin.

My bugs were covering every inch of her skin, and I had them biting and tearing at her flesh.  Her skin was hard, gnarled, and calloused, but I did the damage where I could at the elbows, knees and neck, drawing blood.  I tried to tell myself that she was a monster, a mockery of a real person, and she was too dangerous to be allowed to live.  With that kind of unhinged mental state, and her ability to irradiate people…  I grit my teeth.  No choice.

Grue finished covering the bulging ground with darkness.  Tall-Vista didn’t react.  Her hand was still pointed at us.

“It’s a feint!”  Tattletale shouted.  She spun around.  “There!”

My swarm moved in the direction Tattletale was looking.  I found the bulge, a basketball-sized blister on the side of the containment van, felt it erupting a mere foot from Raymancer’s head a half-second before Grue’s darkness covered it.

Too late.  Raymancer stumbled, coughing.

Grue turned and extended a hand toward the tall Vista.  With my swarm spread out around her, I could sense miniscule explosions appearing all around her, see the flashes of light with the bugs’ distorted vision.  The individual detonations weren’t much larger than golf balls, and even the direct impacts weren’t enough to kill my larger bugs.

“How the fuck do you use Raymancer’s power?”  Grue asked.

“You copy powers?”  Wanton asked.

“Thought you guys read up on us,” Tattletale quipped.  “Grue, focus the beams with the lenses.  The beam appears from the center, so line them up to refine the beam into something more effective.”

“In case you haven’t noticed, I’ve only got the one lens there.”

Lenses?  My bugs weren’t sensing anything.

Wanton was closing the distance, now that the other Vista was distracted trying to avoid Bentley and Bastard, still hobbled by Regent’s power.  As he got halfway to her, the ground around her began to distort and twist into curls.  Wanton disintegrated as he entered the area.

For a heartbeat, I thought she’d used her power on him.  When the debris, dust and chunks of building began stirring and orbiting a central point that continued his general trajectory, I realized it was his power.

Wanton didn’t hesitate as radioactive dust exploded around and inside his new body.  If anything, it proved an advantage, as the dust provided more material to work with and the damage to the street let him pull up chunks of pavement.  He closed the distance to our opponent and began thrashing her.  One of her arms snapped and dangled as one large chunk struck her.

Grue’s attacks weren’t terribly effective.  There were only half the number of explosions, but they were sufficient to kill bugs if they happened to hit one.  He abandoned Raymancer’s power and cast out his darkness toward the Vista.  A moment later, the ground under her feet was contorting, and dust was rising around her.

To our right, Rachel and Bastard were closing in on the Vista.  Her foot was contorted by Regent’s power, and her neck was craning at awkward angles, making it harder for her to focus on them and use her own abilities.

She backed away, raised her one good hand in their direction, and promptly bumped into Imp.  Before the pseudo-Vista could react, she had a taser pressed to her neck.

Rachel closed the distance, Bentley loping forward.  My bugs caught her voice.  An order, not too hard to make out.  Not with the context.

“Kill,” Rachel said, her voice quiet.  The bulldog picked up the Vista in his jaws and bit down until an audible series of cracks marked the breaking of a dozen major bones.  He shook her like a rag doll, no doubt snapping her neck and aggravating every injury he’d just inflicted.  The girl was dead in an instant.

Rachel’s ordered him to drop the body, ordered Bastard to back away from the carcass, and then took hold of Bastard’s chain.  She started to wheel Bentley around to rejoin us, but I was already drawing arrows in the air.  Wanton wasn’t at risk from the radiation in his new form, apparently, but Rachel and her dogs were.  There was nothing saying that any radiation wouldn’t be able to penetrate the monstrous flesh and hit the dog nestled in the core.

Kicking Bentley into an all-out run, she led Bastard in an all-out toward the one on the rooftop.  No hesitation.  No apparent remorse.

Rachel and I had grown closer, to the point of maybe being friends on top of being teammates.  Whatever rifts had formed between us were largely mended, and she trusted me as a leader.  With all that in mind, it was sometimes hard to remember that she was still Rachel at the core of it.  If her psychological wiring didn’t give her any real empathy for her fellow human beings, it wasn’t about to give her any for human-esque beings.

Tecton slammed one gauntlet into the ground, creating a crack that rushed toward the taller Vista.  It exploded in a geyser of debris and dust as it reached her.  She staggered, then staggered again as Grue landed a shot with Raymancer’s power.  She tried to raise one hand to defend herself, but the thin, curved bone of her upper arm had been shattered.  Her broken arm dangled in front of her.

With the topographical map my swarm provided, I noted the presence of thick veins standing out on her arm, where the weight of the dangling limb pulled the skin tight against the shattered bone.  I barely thought about it, sending my bugs to the area, biting deep into the largest one, working together so that one hornet might pull one way, a beetle pulling another, to better rend the flesh or positioning it for a stronger bug to bite into.

She jerked in reaction, and blood began flowing.  Beads of it at first, but the skin was pulled tight and the bugs were relentless.  It virtually tore between the combination of damage and strain.  A small river of blood flowed, intermittently spurting.

That would be an artery, not a vein.  Fuck me.  I tried to suppress the quiet horror that took hold of me as my bugs tracked the blood pouring down her arm, trickling off her fingertips in individual streams.

Still fighting to avoid being brained by Wanton’s telekinetic storm, the tall Vista let out a drawn out half-moan, half-scream, equal parts despair and anger.  It didn’t sound exactly normal, but that didn’t surprise me.  What made my blood run cold was that she almost sounded like a young girl might.  A little too close to reality for comfort.

She went all-out with her power, aimless, directionless.  Street signs, mailboxes, piles of debris, walls and sections of road began twisting and bulging.  Grue laid down a blanket of darkness all around us, aiming to dampen the spread of the radioactive particles.  I wasn’t sure how that worked, but Tattletale thought it did, and I wasn’t about to complain.  I’d settle for a white lie if it meant we were able to stay focused on fighting, rather than the cancer we’d have five years from now.

It took ten seconds before the Vista collapsed.  Only ten seconds to bleed out to the point of unconsciousness.  The blood continued pumping free, and nobody leaped forward to staunch the flow.

I sensed some of the faster capes from Miss Militia’s group making their arrival on the scene.

The wound the rooftop-Vista had sustained from Raymancer was shallow, the majority of it consisting of surface damage to her artificially smooth, thick skin and to her ribs.  I’d only peripherally been aware I was doing it, but my bugs had seized on the opportunity to dig in and attack the more vulnerable flesh of the open wound. She barely seemed to care, focusing her efforts on diverting incoming fire and trying to distort the rooftop to force Grace to fall off.  That changed when several bugs found a hole leading into the empty space surrounding her lungs.

In that same moment, the Vista started trying to claw the bugs out of the shallow cavity.  The distraction afforded one of the heroes a chance to catch her in the head with a gobbet of foam.  A smaller containment foam blaster?

Flying capes closed the distance and settled around her.  There was a brief dialogue that I couldn’t make out with the unfamiliar voices.  Someone said something about foam, there were a few words of argument from a pair, and one pressed a finger to their armband, saying something about a captive.

It was Miss Militia who responded through the armband.  She gave a curt order, and several capes turned away.  One of the capes who hadn’t took aim and shot the fallen girl between the eyes.

The fight was over.  The heroes were already moving north in pursuit of Noelle.  I signaled for Rachel to return.

That moan-scream the tall Vista had made was still ringing in my ears.  It had been way too human for my tastes.

There was no doubt she’d been going all out.  Raymancer was on his knees, supported by Tecton.  He’d taken a hit of the dust straight to the face.  If Tattletale was right… he’d just taken a lethal dose of radiation.  The clone hadn’t even flinched in delivering the attack.

I’d had fights like this.  Dealing with the Nine had been much the same, had demanded we hold nothing back, had involved enemies who didn’t hesitate.  The difference was that the Nine had demanded it because anything less wouldn’t cut it.  Fighting these clones, they were vulnerable.  They only defended themselves so they could keep causing damage.  When I tried to hurt them, they got hurt.  It sounded so lame when I framed it like that, but… it shook me.

Even knowing they were deranged, that Tattletale had confirmed they weren’t really people, I couldn’t ignore how brutal we’d been.  My actions.  The clones weren’t innocent, but they were innocents.  If that made any sense.

And I knew I’d have to do it all over again, the next time we ran into a clone.

Tattletale touched Grue’s arm, and he banished the darkness around us.

“I’m going to die,” Raymancer said, his voice barely above a whisper.

“There’s a good chance, yeah,” Tattletale said.

“Hey,” Tecton said, “Don’t be a bitch.”

She didn’t respond.  Instead, she touched her armband, “Raymancer down.  He needs immediate medical attention for acute radiation poisoning.  Quarantine this location, you’ll want stuff for radioactive decontamination, mobile showers if you’ve got them.  Oh, and Skitter’s armband is out of commisison, we need a replacement before someone mistakes her for a clone.”

Keep close to her, Tattletale,”  Miss Militia said.  “And we’ll deliver one shortly.  Quarantine, civilian evacuation and decontamination are en route.

“We’re moving on to check on Ballistic.  Your man can meet us there.”

“If they can track us with the armband, they can follow us to his headquarters,” Grue commented.

“He can move bases,” I said, “Finding him fast is a bigger priority.”

“He won’t like that,” Grue said.  “Going from a well set-up base of operations to some place improvised?”

“He didn’t want to come today, he deals with the fallout,” I said.  I waved as Rachel approached.  She was still holding Bastard’s chain.  “Let’s go.”

“Tecton?” Tattletale asked.

“I… I can’t leave Raymancer here,” Tecton said.

“Wanton can watch him,” she said.

I looked at Wanton.  He was still in his telekinetic form.  To my swarm sense, he gave me the impression of a miniature galaxy, with dust and various objects orbiting a central point.  When he moved, the outer edges took longer to catch up than the bits closer to the center, almost like a jellyfish in water.

“Hey, W,” Tecton said.  “Fight’s over.”

“He can’t change back,” Tattletale said.  “If he does, that dust he drew into his t.k. body is going to settle, and then he’ll be in the same shape Raymancer is.  Maybe everyone in his vicinity will.”


“But they can stick him in a decontamination shower,” Tattletale said.  “Just needs to hold himself together long enough for that to happen.  Not to worry.  Fifteen minute decontamination and he’s clean.”

“Longest he’s ever held that form was twelve minutes.”

“Then he’ll need to hold together for longer.  But we’ve got to get ahead of Noelle before the next trap is set up.  We need you to come with us.”

“You want me to leave my team,” Tecton said.

“We could run into more Vistas.  She warps space, distorts architecture.  If the next batch is organized enough to cut off all avenues of retreat while keeping their distance, or drop more buildings on us, we’d need you to help.  Rachel’s dogs aren’t going to be able to get us free if Vista buries us, or if she traps us under some bubble of stretched building.”

“Go, T,” Raymancer said.

“But you-”

“I’ll get looked after, and I’ll give Wanton he encouragement he needs to break his old record.  Get Grace and go.”

“You heard the man,” Tattletale said.  “You want to drive?”

“You go ahead,” Tecton said.  “Driving with the suit is a hassle.”

“All the better,” Tattletale said, cheery.

Tecton didn’t reply as he got into the van.  I climbed onto Bentley’s back.

The van had to take a detour, given the three sections of road that had been raised as barriers and the one fallen building.  Bentley wasn’t so disadvantaged.  We crossed the ruins of the toppled building.

I could smell the thick, metallic scent of blood in the same moments that his hot breath wafted past me.

I wondered if I should be in the van.  I could communicate with Tattletale and Grue if I was, and it would mean I wasn’t experiencing an agonizing pain in my side every time he set his feet down with too much force or leaped an obstacle.

That said, I wasn’t sure I wanted to turn Rachel away if she was being friendly.

The van stopped to pick up Grace.  They traveled down a different street, moving parallel to Rachel and I.

“…so fast?” Tecton asked.  I couldn’t make it all out.

I caught the tail end of Tattletale’s reply: “… a trap.”

I drew out letters on the dashboard with my bugs: ‘Trouble?’

She shook her head.  I didn’t catch what she said.  She repeated herself.  “…ventative measure.”

Preventative measure.  She was picking up the speed so any other enemies that were lying in wait would have less time to spring any surprises on us.  I scattered the bugs, left a brief ‘ok’ and then removed those.  I caught Tecton saying something, but couldn’t make it out.  His mask didn’t help.

I redoubled my efforts to check our surroundings and find any possible clones of Vista, Uber, Leet or Circus.

We caught up to a group of the faster-moving heroes who’d flown ahead.  They were dispatching another Vista.  She was shorter, thicker in the arms and legs, with a neck as thick around as her head was.  The space around her was twisted into jagged shapes, with some raised into points.  Two of the capes had been injured but were still fighting.

We rode past, and the van with the others gave chase.

The flying capes weren’t moving with purpose.  They were roving the area, going west-to-east and back again as they moved in a general northerly direction.

We were nearly at Ballistic’s base when a digitized voice sounded over the armband.  Not Miss Militia.  Dragon’s A.I.   “We have a sighting.  All cooperating capes are ordered to stand down.  Remain at your present coordinates until further notice.

Stand down?  I tapped Rachel on the shoulder, and she pulled Bentley to a stop.

The armband buzzed again, but it was Miss Militia’s voice this time.  “Eidolon has found our primary target.  He has requested that all capes in the area remain in position.”

I caught Tattletale pressing the button on her armband.  She asked, “Why?”

Whatever program was managing communications, it didn’t see fit to convey Tattletale’s message.

The van caught up to us.  Tattletale rolled her window down, and opened the back.  The others climbed out to join the conversation.  Grace folded her arms and hung back.

“What’s going on?”  I asked.

“Don’t know,” Tattletale said.  “But if Eidolon is fighting Noelle…”

Regent finished her sentence for her, “We might not have to worry about the end of the world happening in two years.”

“Why is Miss Militia letting this slide?” I asked.  “She has to know the risk.  Everyone has to know the risk.”

“She’s letting this slide because Eidolon outranks her and she has no choice,” Tattletale said.  “And he’s doing this because he’s got an agenda.”

“An agenda?” Grace asked.


“He’s the top hero in the Protectorate.  His agenda is doing the right thing.  Is this what you guys do?  You analyze the situation until you’ve twisted it into a scenario where you just have to do something?”

“Yeah,” Regent said.  “We’re really good at it, too.”

“Ha ha,” Grace said, without any humor.

“Look,” I said.  “Fine.  You guys are helping us, so you get a say.  If you guys are willing to hear me out and you decide that there’s no merit to what I’m saying, we can go along with what you want to do.”

“Hear you out?”

“Yeah.  Look, you can’t deny that putting one of the most powerful people in the world in close quarters with someone who could turn Vista into those things is a fucking bad idea.”

“Sure I can.”

“Play nice, Grace,” Tecton said.

“No, I’m going to make my arguments.  He’s not stupid.  He knows what he can do, and he’s heard what she can do.  You don’t get to be a member of the Triumvirate if you’re an idiot.”

“He’s desperate,” Tattletale said,  “He’s losing his powers.  He knows putting himself in dangerous situations makes his power stronger, like how one of my teammates gets a little stronger when outraged, and another gets a little stronger when feeling protective.  Fighting Noelle is nearly as dangerous as fighting Endbringers.”

Endbringers.  When Leviathan had attacked, it had been destruction layered on top of more destruction.  Noelle was being pretty damn subtle for someone who could tear vault doors apart and generate an army of superpowered soldiers.

Even in terms of the overall impact of her assault, as far as I knew, it had been limited to one fallen building, two injured capes and one in critical condition.  It felt like too little.

Then again, the sun wasn’t up.  Dinah had said Noelle wouldn’t do any real damage until dawn.  Would things get worse?

“How long until sunrise?” I asked, cutting Grace off just as she started to voice a response.

“Nine minutes,” Tattletale answered.

“Dinah said the situation doesn’t start getting really bad until dawn…” I trailed off.

“You think this is why the situation goes south,” Grue said.

“It’s a possibility.”

Tattletale pressed the button on her armband.  “This is really bad timing on Eidolon’s part, M.M..  Shit’s due to go down at sunrise.  Can you call him off?  Remind him?”

There was no indication the message went through.

“Fucking computer,” she said.  “Let’s go.”

“No,” Grace said.  “You said it was our call.  I don’t buy the argument.  We stay put.”

“Tecton?” I asked.

He was still in the passenger seat.  “I don’t know.  Are you willing to disobey the order and have Miss Militia okay a kill order on you?”

Try to okay a kill order on us,” Imp said.

“Oh, well then,” Tecton said.  “That’s not a problem.”

I thought about the possible scenarios that could unfold.  Deranged Vistas had been brutal enough.  Deranged mutant Eidolons?

“Yeah,” I said.  “If it comes down to it, I’m willing.”

“Be it on your heads,” Tecton said.

“Get in if you’re coming,” Tattletale said.  “Get out if you’re not.”

Tecton hesitated, but he stayed in his seat.

“Tecton?” Grace asked.

“They believe it enough to go this far.  They’ve either got an unhealthy amount of conviction or they’re insane-”

“Or both,” Imp said.

“Or both.  If it’s conviction, I can accept that they might know what they’re doing.  The same argument you made about Eidolon being an upper echelon member of the Protectorate applies to them.  They didn’t get here by being terrible at what they do.”

“They did get to the point where they’re about to get kill orders put out on them, and you stand to get in trouble with the Wards.”

“What’s the worst they could do?  As a tinker, I’m a protected species.  Not like they’re going to fire me.  If these guys are right, they might need our help.  If they’re wrong, maybe I get in a bit of trouble.  I’m willing to take that bet.”

“And if they’re trying something?  Or if they are insane?”

“Then it’s better I’m along for the ride, isn’t it?”

Grace didn’t respond.  Instead, she turned around and walked away.

When she reached the back of the truck, she hopped in.  “You fucking owe me, Tec.”

She slammed the one door closed, as if to punctuate her irritation with the situation, leaving the other open for my teammates.

Tattletale dropped her armband out the driver’s side window.  The rest of the Undersiders discarded theirs.  There was a pause before Tecton and Grace followed suit, throwing theirs free of the van.

That done, Tattletale put the van in gear.   It was already starting to move by the time Imp and Regent had climbed in and slammed the doors behind them.

With Tattletale’s ability to identify Eidolon’s general location and my ability to narrow the result down with my bugs, it only took a few minutes to find them.  The issue was that we only had a few minutes to begin with.

Eidolon was in the air, flying a safe distance above Noelle.  And Noelle…

I couldn’t get a read on Noelle.  My bugs disappeared into her as they made contact, their signal distorting and cutting off.  It left me with a hazy picture.  She was big.  African elephant big.  I didn’t get much more than that.

They were talking.

Eidolon had his hands folded into his sleeves, like an ancient sensei, legs dangling, his costume billowing around him.  His voice was calm, quiet, in stark contrast to the hot breath that billowed around Noelle as she panted with no less than five mouths.  Four of the mouths were considerably larger than the one owned by the rough human shape on top.

I only caught two words as he spoke to her.  Coil was one.  Cauldron was another.

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109 thoughts on “Queen 18.6

  1. Throwing out another of my semiregular reminders to vote on topwebfiction, if it’s no trouble. Worm’s only a little ways away from being #1 on the ‘votes in the last year’ list.

  2. Heh. He’s trying to recruit her? Potentially not a smart move.

    And now Skitter gets her wish of having a tinker on the team, as everyone here gets a kill order issued on them, Tecton included.

    • Well we know that Cauldron wanted Coils plan to use her to succeed so he might be offering her a possible cure for her cooperation or he is intentionally trying to put himself in danger to give himself a powerup by admitting that it is Cauldron’s fault she is like that. I predict he gets copied due to Dinah’s prediction. But their merry band of troublemakers might start telling some secrets they heard if one of them survives the night, so he can’t let them live.

      • Plus five mouths? I just had my wisdom teeth pulled so Noelle has earned some sympathy for me and it raises so many stupid questions. Does she brush/floss them all? Did Coil hire a dentist? Can she talk out of them?

        • That’s what you ask?

          Somehow, dental hygene doesn’t seem likely to be a concern of Miss Regenerator. And I don’t know if Coil could pay enough for that dentist, given the likelihood of getting absorbed and spat out with a murderous clone. (Oh, yeah, and the whole “monster” thing.)

      • There are still the heroes who had natural trigger events. We know Cauldron pretty much is the leadership, but it remains to be seen just how thorough their infiltration of the rest of the PRT is.

  3. You had to stuff insects in her chest cavity, didn’t you Wildbow? I mean really, that is quite possibly the most painful thing that Skitter could do with her powers. I knew that it was going to happen eventually but it still freaked me out when you actually wrote it. Good work.

    Also CAULDRON!!!

    • That trick she did to Clockblocker when he accidentally froze all those insects on himself wasn’t exactly pleasant, either.

  4. I like Tecton and Grace, and I hope that they survive, even though, given that they’re actual good guys who could be a positive influence on the group, the odds of that are probably significantly less than Dinah’s doomsday scenario not coming to pass.

    • Yeah, some new blood on the team to make up for some of what’s inevitably going to be spilled would be nice. Hey, at least they have names. They’re mauve shirts at the very least.

      • If I remember right, every single character that appears in this story was given a full name and backstory. Including the guys who fought Leviathan.

        • Sorta kinda. Some were just names & power ideas, with maybe one line of history/description/motivation; what you may be remembering was when I said that I’d sketched out the full story/path of Leviathan’s attack, and each of the reports from the armband was worked out as to how it happened (whether main story characters or otherwise), roughly.

  5. Now this was a damn good chapter, with both action and drama side by side. There were a few spelling mistakes and strange wordings. One was “joins of the elbows” instead of “joints of the elbows,” but that’s the only one I can seem to find now, even though I remember seeing a few more.

    Anyways, the Chicago Wards seem to have a death flag over all of them now. The two they left behind will slowly die, and the two that came along will not likely cooperate with the Undersiders or understand the implications of Eidolon negotiating with Noelle about Cauldron. They even know about Grue’s power copying and Skitter’s insect listening. They’ll probably die in the upcoming fight.

    Speaking of the insect listening, it’s starting to get harder keeping track of who’s saying what due to this. For example, there was the passage “The armband buzzed again, but it was Miss Militia’s voice this time.” Am I right in assuming that this armband one is Tattletale’s, and Skitter heard that using her powers? Or was it Bitch’s, and Skitter heard Tattletale’s response inside the van?

    Last question: when Tattletale says “Fucking computer,” does this mean that she talking about the armband programs, or does she know Dragon is an A.I. by now?

    Thoughts? Speculations? Wild Mass Guesses?

    • Fixed joins. Just reworded that sentence, actually. My proofreader just pointed out a bunch of others. Not sure where my head was at, but just couldn’t proofread to save my life tonight.

        • You want to know what’ll screw with people even more.

          Having sex with a machine is neither straight or gay. Aside from the fact that we don’t know for sure he was sticking it into the gynoid Dragon, there’s that Dragon is basically a computer program in a network. There’s not really any gender there.

          Now you go and think about each individual sex act and realize that a lot of them don’t necessarily depend on the gender of the partner. There’s attraction and then there’s what you like done to you. Like a straight guy who likes getting pegged or a woman who sticks flashlight on a roomba and tells it to set a course for Alpha Cent”Ah!”ri at high speed.

          Hope the guy puts up a firewall every time they go at it though. Safe sex is important, lest you catch a virus or even a worm of some sort. Just that in his case, using a Trojan is a bad idea.

          • Sorry to be that guy but this is pretty much completely wrong.

            If you’d been talking about sex as opposed to gender then you’d be mostly right but given that gender is not necessarily linked to sex your point falls apart.

            Dragon lacks any physical sex, even her gynoid body is ultimately just another shell, meaning its sex is more or less meaningless. However gender is entirely an identity concept, and as fluid and many-formed as it can be, Dragon seems to have a firmly set female gender. She thinks of herself as female, in short.

            This in turn then messes with the point on their relationship being neither straight nor gay. Now part of the issue here is that in commonly used language, homosexual and heterosexual also imply homoromantic and heteroromantic respectively. Whereas in this situation it’s heteroromantic but lacks any clear state as far as sexualness goes. They seem to prefer the guy/girl thing but there’s no reason for this other than their personal preferences.

            Of course this gets more complex once you remember us asexuals, a category Dragon most likely falls into (given her interest in armsmaster tens though, I guess more demi- then full-ace) and I have my thoughts about armsmaster (mr obsessive) as well. However in short, while I’m guessing it was meant to be humourous, your post fails to account for the full context of these terms.

            And come on, why would they possibly need a firewall? It’s not like they’ve gonna be unfaithful…though there was that horrible crap with the Dragonslayers…poor Dragon.

  6. I kinda wish this part had been out a couple of nights ago. That way during the Superbowl, anyone missing a pass could have just called Vista-shenanigans.

    Besides, bugs in the ole chest cavity can’t be that bad. Just look at Candyman. He’s up and walking around. Dangerously underweight, but everyone has their problems.

    Like the heroes and their ranks and all that letting Eidolon go one on one with the No’ One. Not a bad name for her either. We can call her No’Body! She’s most famous for stabbing out the eye of a cyclops a long time ago. Of course, 5 mouths may imply she’s on her way to 7, which is one depiction of Tiamat. It’d be quite the Revelation if she had a crown for each head as well.

    There is supposed to be some leeway for invoking one’s own morality when it comes to orders, but in reality you tend to see people prosecuted, and sometimes treated horribly, for going with what is more moral despite their orders. To be fair, it isn’t just the military. Most people are susceptible to a fowl little dance called the Goose Step. Back to the idea of doing the right thing despite what the lawful society says: it took the villains to decide to go deal with Eidolon and Noelle. Or to actually classify Noelle as S class. Who can save the day? The Candyman can.

    • I also really like the term “Vista-shenanigans.” We’ve got to use it more often.

      You know, Gecko, I’ve noticed you have at least two different humor modes. Sometimes, we get stuff like this, with rapid fire in-jokes and puns. Other times, you’re the monarch of gross-out comedy. Are you more than one person, or just one with many mouths, too?

      • Nope, one person with one physical mouth. Though you might divide some of my interactions up between me staying in character and me being OOC. One hint is that IC Gecko will not make reference to having family or having done something in school or college. An old story over at LoN would give a hint to that, though I’m working on expanding on it and telling more than a summary. OOC Gecko will, but won’t take credit for villainy. And then some situations just don’t matter as far as telling which is which.

        If I were to do a serial or ongoing bloglike “diary” of my villainous intent, I’m thinking I’d have OOC as a secondary character to handle things between the fourth wall and is responsible for fielding all the questions in the “real world” that IC Gecko is writing to. Probably make OOC refer to something like “Optimal Outer Control” in the process.

      • I’m afraid my attempt to garner the goodwill of the U.S. by wrecking the Superbowl has failed. All I caused to happen is the NFL showed sweaty men handling balls in the dark. Figures that so many of them were from San Francisco.

  7. One Vista killed by Bitch, one by Skitter and one executed by the heroes after being taken prisoner. I wonder if one of them was supposed to have been Scape from the tags.

    The use of lethal force, even if sanctioned and with the heroes are willing to do the same will not endear them to the authorities. The Undersiders are probably getting the blame for the two Wards that are down.

    On a positive note there is a chance that if they get out of this without a kill order for interfering with Cauldron business, they might actually get proper medical help in the aftermath. If the heroes have any healers that they can call in to help Raymancer they might also heal Taylor.

  8. ““Or both,” Imp said.” I love you Imp. Regent’s got his usual gems as well.
    I’m guessing the darkness attenuates the radiation, though not sure how it prevents the spread of dust.

    I love the turn this suddenly took at the end, and the new characters as well.

    “Some of the flying capes that had been assigned to watch over us were targeting the Vista on the rooftop,” Maybe a note about how she noticed?

  9. Amazing chapter! Can’t wait to see what Eidolon has to say to Noelle, even more curious about what Noelle hears to listen to.

    Also, now I’m wondering what Raymancer’s power is. It sounds like some sort of magnifying-glass effect, but in 3d so it works in a small sphere…or perhaps I’m rambling.

    Speaking of Raymancer, poor Raymancer. And Wanton. People whose power involve wind or storms never seem to do well in this story…

  10. Oh, jesus… I assume Noelle is about to tell Eidolon to go straight to hell. Cue epic fight and rampage. I guess recruiting her is the logical step for Cauldron to take, assuming they can find a cure… But, she’s supped for too long on false promises.

  11. Well, more fodder for my “Tiamat, not Echidna” campaign.

    Also, really hoping Tecton will see something that shatters his belief in the PRT and make him join the Undersiders.

  12. Well then……I’ll take the fastest shuttle to mars please.

    Wildbow I love the updates that make me think ‘What else could possible happen?!’ It seems Taylor CAN’T control the bug No’ clones. I see Ediey getting cloned then the whole country is fucked. Unless Scion comes and simply incinerates No’.

    Awesome chapter as usual Wildbow.🙂

  13. Well, the upcoming conversation should be… interesting, to say the least. I really don’t think Cauldron had a hand in creating Noelle. They’re opportunistic dicks, yes, but they do oppose the Endbringers. Noelle is a product of a series of freakish coincidences engineering by the Simurgh.

        • Why would I? *Noms on popcorn* This is almost like the meta-literature version of Saw. I never was much for torture porn, though. Maybe Wildbow will update lots more if someone shows their devotion by making some sort of bug out of people. Ooh, like a centipede!

          • @Hydrargentium – At this moment you live in a fantasy land of happiness and rainbows. But hey you read Worm… so you might be able to take this knowledge. PG is probably referencing a movie called the Human Centipede. The movie revolves around Bonesaw levels of body horror, in which 3 people are surgically attached mouth to anus against their will. I recommend not watching it if you want to keep the rainbows around.

          • I have not seen it either, but that was the reference. I did see the South Park version though. Seeing as how I don’t particular care to see people tortured, nor do I have a fetish for scat play, I don’t have much of a reason to watch it.

            I did find myself really liking a gif on this list of awesome creepypasta the other night though. That was their name for it. Some were just retold urban legends like “Humans can lick too”.

      • Somewhat related: I know of one person who’s managed to turn internet writing into a full time job (besides Howard Tayler, Penny Arcade, etc.). But then again that person writes text-based porn games and he lost his day job some time last year. Actually doing really well as he’s been living off of donations for at least the last five months. It helps that his wife apparently works so there are two incomes in the household.

        I was getting to a point I swear. You basically need two things to become a full time writer. 1) Dedicated fanbase willing to throw money at you, which you have, but it always helps to have a larger pool. 2) The dive into doing nothing but producing content. Usually requires a push/fall. You CAN produce daily updates as evidenced by arcs 11 and 17, but updating every other day would be more feasible and wouldn’t be as likely to induce writer’s block/creative sterility.

        Or if you just want to increase donation revenue I’d suggest creating more incentives. Like allowing all donors to cast a vote for which character from a select pool gets the next bonus interlude.

        Anywho, great chapter, still wondering what Scape is, done rambling, TTFN.

        • I know Alexandra Erin managed it for some time, not sure if she still does it.

          As it stands, I’m pretty much producing 3 chapters every 7 days, which is close to one every two days – it also keeps me a little more sane and gives readers a way of knowing when the next update is coming without having to double check.

          You’re quite right, though. More fans is always helpful/key, and that’s why I very much appreciate any and all support my readers give on that front, be it reviews or recommending the story to friends, or just sticking around and continuing to read.

          I know there’s faster ways to success. You touch on two – producing more content is one. That’s dangerous, though, and I’ve seen others try to ramp up their production schedule and burn out.

          So I’d want to be gentle about any adjustments. If I did move to a strict three-a-week schedule after hitting the point of making minimum wage doing this, I’d want to do so on a permanent basis; I don’t want to switch to a Tues-Thurs-Sat schedule with bonuses on Sundays if I’m going to break down and go back to the old schedule when it turns out to be too much.

          The second path to success is one I’m a little more leery of, for different reasons. Two of the most popular web serials to date are/were Tales of Mu and An Intimate History of the Greater Kingdom. Both feature pervasive sexual content. Sex sells. It helped that both had some stellar writing (though some would say Tales of Mu hit a slump). Anyways, to put it bluntly, if I did want to make money writing, everything else be damned, I could probably write erotica. I’ve heard on reddit’s writing subreddit that it’s a backup option for a lot of authors out there.

          Except that’s not really me.

          As it stands, I think I’ll keep doing what I’m doing, until things have changed more dramatically. Readership is climbing steadily (January, I had a few hundred more regular readers than I did in December), and I haven’t seen any indication that I’m going to hit a ceiling anytime soon.

          • Probably best to leave the majority of sexual content to us. I can understand a reluctance to go that route. It is easy to get too caught up in it or have it take over the narrative.

            You got us here with what you’ve done so far, because your story is already fucking awesome.

          • There’s the more usual path to living off your writing too; finding an agent, getting a publishing deal and becoming the next J.K. Rowlings (why aim low?).

            Seriously though, you’re putting out publishable quality prose at a pace that I don’t think any other professional writer can match. That kind of thing should have agents and book publishers salivating to work with you.

          • I find myself kind of horrified at the thought of Worm selling it’s soul to a publisher.

            Perhaps it’d be fine, or perhaps heavy editing would completely change the story. The latter thought terrifies me.

          • Given that your statement of getting this as a full time job made me immediately jump to the one pornomancer whose work I follow, I’m well aware of how sex sells.🙂

            I need to work on being more clear with the things I write online, as you covered some ideas I thought I had gotten across (more content = more fans, but lower quality = not worth it). Need to stop this stream of consciousness writing. Keeps getting me into arguments in Youtube comments.

            As long as you keep writing, I’m a happy camper. Though I admit the thought that Worm is ending later this year fills me with dread. I only started reading last November and I’ve come to enjoy having something really engaging and regular to read.

          • Seeing as how I happen to know a VERY successful science fiction writer (as in, you’d know the name if you heard it, assuming you actually read science fiction), I can say with some certainty that not all publishers do slash and burn. But really, if you’re planning to go that route, get yourself an agent, Wildbow, and let them handle the details. If you can convince an established literary agent to represent you, you pretty much know your work isn’t crap. Since they only work on commission, they don’t waste their time on things that won’t make them money, and in the “speculative fiction” genre, crap rarely makes money. (One might not like what sells in the genre, but one can rarely generate a valid argument that what sells is, indeed, genuinely crappy — these days, anyway.)


          • Oh, and don’t forget, there’s always merchandising. Even if you just go with a Cafe Press store, you’ll still be make some extra cash from your creative properties.

            I mean, really, is there anyone here who WOULDN’T want a T-shirt with the TWF banner printed across the back? Or something with the Chiba version of their favourite Undersider on it (one of the set drawn by one of the readers here a while back)?


          • HG, I have a series full of sparkly vampires and 50 whole shades of gray that say that what sells is crappy at times. I’d like to bash them over the head with a copy of House of Leaves and declare their ignorance of good literature, but that wouldn’t kill them off. Nope, would need to grab an axe.

            But yes, merchindising! Like with Worm: the plushy, featuring Bentley, Bastard, Angelica, and the other dogs, as well as a plushy Atlas and maybe a plushy Crawler. Or Worm: the action figures, like Grue with kung fu grip, karate chop action, evil volcano lair, and a pull string for catchphrases *pulls the string, causing the action figure to say “May the Schwarz be with you!”* We can fix that later, we’re just reusing some things that never sold.

            Finally, there’s Worm: the flamethrowah! *fires a stream into the air, cackling madly* The kids love that one.

  14. What with the update on Scion (Or Zion as it appears), I’m expecting him to show up, consider Noelle an Endbringer, and start hurling high-level, high-speed shit at her until she flips the metaphorical switch and goes into kill mode. Probably 1 or two cloned Eidolon’s in there as well.

    Imagine a cloned Skitter facing off against Skitter. Who’d control what? Or a Regent who if possible is cloned to be even more annoying/hilarious.

    • Well, if the powers came out different, perhaps a skitter who turns bugs into explosives, or a skitter who can make giant bugs, or a skitter who can actually turn into a pile of insects?

  15. I wonder if Skitter is the one to screw things up and cause Noelle to do the damage. The increased number of bugs trying to touch her might have been noticed. Giving Eidolon time to talk to her might have included a deal to keep it private. Plus, let’s face facts. He IS dumb enough to try and hand the Undersiders over.

    *throws Skitter a metal folding chair* It’s dangerous to slobberknock alone. Take this.

  16. I just noticed a continunity error.
    Tattletale offers to let Tecton drive, but he says “no, you take it. ” because of his suit. But a paragraph later, tattletale is overheard urging him to go faster.

    So which one is driving?

  17. “I don’t know. Are you willing to disobey the order and have Miss Militia okay a kill order on you?”
    “Am I willing to face a lethal threat so I can do the right thing and protect people? Yes. Are YOU?”


    (OK, I’m being mean. He actually seems like a pretty nice guy. I just thought his argument was pretty friggin’ ironic, considering he’s the hero there.)

  18. “One of the capes who hadn’t took aim and shot the fallen girl between the eyes.”

    Not sure what this sentence was intended to be. Maybe remove the “and”?

    • It’s a continuation of the previous sentence and it makes sense in context.

      “[…] several capes turned away. One of the capes who hadn’t took aim and shot the fallen girl between the eyes.”

  19. Grue turned and extended a hand toward the tall Vista. With my swarm spread out around her, I could sense miniscule explosions appearing all around her, see the flashes of light with the bugs’ distorted vision. The individual detonations weren’t much larger than golf balls, and even the direct impacts weren’t enough to kill my larger bugs.

    “How the fuck do you use Raymancer’s power?” Grue asked.

    “You copy powers?” Wanton asked.

    why is grue the one asking that ?
    reasonably he knows how he does that

    • He’s asking how to control/direct it. The paragraph above shows that he’s trying to hit Vista-clone, but the attacks are weak and disordered, so he asks how to use it properly.

  20. Necropost!
    “I’d settle for a white lie if it meant we were able to stay focused on fighting, rather than the cancer we’d have five years from now.”
    Skitter’s introspection about radiation effects is a little off base – but maybe that’s just her being misinformed in-universe. The lethal dose of radiation is 3-5 Sv, while the lifetime risk of dying from radiation-related cancer is 0,5% per Sv. As long as they survive this face-off, there’s only a few percent chance of them dying from radiation-related cancer at some point in the future. And given that parahumans lead very dangerous lives, I don’t think they have a high chance of living long enough to die from cancer.

  21. Loving this arc. Not got much to say, really; lots of developments that are great to see (like teaming up with the heroes).

    A couple of typos:
    “out of commisison”
    “the same effect that I’d seen with her face” (curious turn of phrase from a blind Skitter)

  22. Typo:
    “I’ll get looked after, and I’ll give Wanton he encouragement he needs to break his old record. Get Grace and go.”

    “I’ll get looked after, and I’ll give Wanton the encouragement he needs to break his old record. Get Grace and go.”

  23. Eidolon offering letting Noelle know that Cauldron could remake the other half of the solution she drank might be just the thing to talk her down and give her a glimmer of hope again. But the Undersiders arriving on the scene might be just the thing to set her off and spoil that delicate negotiation.

  24. Honestly I think Eidolon is doing really well here. He has an S-class threat in front of him, and he’s talking to her. Her threat level will skyrocket if she touches him, sure, but he’s flying and she’s not moving, and she’s not fast or agile enough to close on him quickly on her own. For a guy who’s supposedly looking for ways to put himself in danger, he seems to have things under control.

    The worst-case scenario is that Noelle gets her hands on Eidolon. To get there from here, two things need to happen: Noelle needs to stop listening and decide to fight, and she needs to have backup who can get her in touch with a flying guy who also has god-knows-what powers. One of the Vistas might be able to do that, if they surprise him- but he would have to be a real dumbass to get surprised by sudden aggression in this situation. If he has any brains in his head at all, he’s keeping watch over the whole area as long as he’s talking, and you don’t get to be in the Triumvirate by not having any brains.

    The arrival of the Undersiders might push things toward a fight, it’s true. But giving a stand-down order without explanation, when they aren’t part of his command structure and have reason not to trust his judgment, was practically inviting them to come watch his ass.

    His real mistake here was not giving out all the information. The armbands allow perfect communication across the full range of the PRT forces- I’m pretty sure he could have not only shared details of his reasoning but transmitted a live video feed of the situation. If the Undersiders knew he was keeping his distance, not engaging, watching his back, and had Noelle in a conversation rather than a fight, they would’ve been much more comfortable hanging back.

  25. Typo:
    “I’ll get looked after, and I’ll give Wanton he encouragement he needs to break his old record.
    Missing the ‘t’ in ‘the’.

  26. Is no one else just a tiny bit disappointed he never got around to using Alta-Vista as a pun?

    (It WAS the first to use a multi-threaded crawler stemming from one source… although I might be reaching and the only one to find that funny)

  27. Interesting thing about light attacks — no mater how your target bends space in between you and it, you will hit the target if you fire a light based attack at what you see. There is no missing unless your attack aim-point doesn’t move to keep up with the targets visual location. Raymancer should never miss.

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