As I agreed to join the Undersiders, there was some whooping and cheering. I felt a touch guilty, for acting under false pretenses. I also felt pleased with myself, in an irrational way.
“Where do we go from here?” Lisa asked Brian.
“Not sure,” Brian said, “It’s not like we’ve done this before. I suppose we should let Rachel know, but she said she might work today.”
“If the new girl is okay with it, let’s stop by our place,” Lisa suggested, “See if Rache is there, celebrate the new recruit and get her filled in.”
“Sure,” I said.
“It’s just a few blocks away,” Brian said, “But we would stand out if you came with in costume.”
I stared at him for a moment, not wanting to comprehend his statement. If I took too long to respond, I realized, I would ruin this plan before it went anywhere. Whatever the case, I could have kicked myself. Of course this was the natural progression of events. Joining their team would mean I would be expected to share my identity, since they already had. Until I did, they wouldn’t be able to trust me with their secrets.
I could have blamed the lapse in judgement and foresight on my lack of sleep or the distraction of the events earlier in the day, but that didn’t change matters. I had maneuvered myself into a corner.
“Alright,” I said, sounding calmer than I felt. I hoped. “This costume is kinda uncomfortable under clothes. Can I get some privacy?”
“You want an alley, or…” Lisa asked, trailing off.
“I’ll change here, just take a minute,” I said, impulsively, as I glanced around. The buildings on the street were mostly one and two stories tall, with the only buildings taller than the one we were on being the one half a block away, and the one right next to us. There weren’t any windows on the building next to us with a great angle for seeing me change, and I doubted anyone on the distant building could see me as more than a figure two inches tall. If someone could see me change out of costume and make out enough details to identify me, I’d be surprised.
As the three of them headed to the fire escape, I pulled out the clothes I’d stuffed into the backpack. Armor panels aside, my costume was essentially one piece, with the exceptions being the belt and the mask. I kept the mask on as I undid the belt and peeled off the main costume. I wasn’t indecent – I was wearing a black tank top and black biking shorts underneath, in part for extra warmth. Silk wasn’t the best insulator on its own. I stepped into my jeans and pulled on the sweatshirt, then rubbed my arms and shoulders to brush off the mild chill. I put my costume and the plastic lunchbox in my backpack.
I felt a stab of regret at not having chosen better clothes to wear than a loose fitting sweatshirt and jeans that were too big for me. That regret quickly turned to a pang of anxiety. What would they think when they saw the real me? Brian and Alec were good looking guys, in very different ways. Lisa was, on the sliding scale between plain and pretty, more pretty than not. My own scale of attractiveness, by contrast, put me somewhere on a scale that ranged from ‘nerd’ to ‘plain’. My opinion of where I fit on that scale changed depending on the mood I was in when I was looking in the mirror. They were cool, confident, assured people. I was… me.
I stopped myself before I could get worked up. I wasn’t regular old Taylor, here. In the here and now, I was the girl who had put Lung in the hospital, accidental as it was. I was the girl who was going undercover to try and get the details on a particularly persistent gang of supervillains. I was, until I came up with a better name to go by, Bug, the girl the Undersiders wanted on their team.
If I said I made my way down the fire escape filled to the brim with confidence, I’d be lying. That said, I had managed to hype myself up enough to get myself down the ladder, mask still on, costume in my bag. I stood before them, glanced around to make sure nobody else was around, and then pulled off my mask. I had a few terrifying heartbeats where I was half-blind, their facial features just smudges, before I put on the glasses I’d had in my bag.
“Hi,” I said, lamely, using my fingers to comb my hair back into order, “I guess it wouldn’t work if you kept calling me Bug or new girl. I’m Taylor.”
Using my real name was a big gamble on my part. I was afraid it would be another thing I would be kicking myself for five minutes from now, much like the realization that I’d have to go uncostumed. I rationalized it by telling myself that I was already in this wholesale. Being truthful about that one thing might well save my hide if any of them decided to do some digging on me, or if I ran into someone I knew while in their company. I figured, hoped, that by the time this whole thing was over, I could maybe pull some strings with someone like Armsmaster and avoid having them leak my real name. Not impossible to imagine, given the level of security around some of the prisons they had for criminal parahumans. In any event, I would cross that bridge when I got to it.
Alec offered the slightest roll of his eyes as I introduced myself, while Brian just grinned. Lisa, though, put one of her arms around my shoulders and gave me a one-armed squeeze of a hug. She was a little older than I was, so she was just tall enough to be at the perfect height to do it. What caught me off guard was how nice the gesture felt. Like I had been needing a hug from someone who wasn’t my dad for a long time.
We walked deeper into the Docks as a group. While I had lived on the periphery of the area my entire life, and while most people would say the neighborhood I lived in was part of the ‘Docks’, I had never really been in the areas that gave this part of the city such a bad reputation. At least, I hadn’t if I discounted last night, and it had been dark then.
It wasn’t an area that had been kept up, and kind of gave off an impression of a ghost town, or what a city might look like if war or disaster forced people to abandon it for a few years. Grass and weeds grew between slats in the sidewalk, the road had potholes you could hide a cat in, and the buildings were all faded, consisting of peeling paint, cracked mortar and rusty metal. The desaturated colors of the buildings were contrasted by splashes of vividly colored graffiti. As we passed what had once been a main road for the trucks traveling between the warehouses and the docks, I saw a row of power lines without wires stretching between them. At one point weeds had crawled most of the way up the poles, only to wither and die at some point. Now each of the poles had a mess of dead brown plants hanging off of them.
There were people, too, though not too many were out and about. There were those you expected, like a homeless bag lady with a grocery cart and a shirtless old man with a beard nearly to his navel, collecting bottles and cans from a dumpster. There were others that surprised me. I saw a woman that looked surprisingly normal, in clothes that weren’t shabby enough to draw attention, herding four near-identical infant children into a factory building with a faded sign. I wondered if they were living there or if the mom was working there and just couldn’t do anything with her kids but bring them with her. We passed a twenty-something artist and his girlfriend, sitting on the sidewalk with paintings propped up around them. The girl waved at Lisa as we walked by, and Lisa waved back.
Our destination was a red brick factory with a massive sliding metal door locked shut by a coil of chain. Both the chain and door had rusted so much that I expected that neither offered any use. The size of the door and the broadness of the driveway made me think that large trucks or small boats would have been backed up through the entryway back in the factory’s heyday. The building itself was large, stretching nearly half the block, two or three stories tall. The background of the sign at the top of the building had faded from red to a pale orange-pink, but I could make out the bold white letters that read ‘Redmond Welding’.
Brian let us in through a small door on the side of the building, rather than the big rusted one. The interior was dark, lit only by rows of dusty windows near the ceiling. I could make out what had been massive machines and treadmills prior to being stripped to their bare bones. Sheets covered most of the empty and rusted husks. Seeing the cobwebs, I reached out with my power and felt bugs throughout. Nobody had been active in here for a long time.
“Come on,” Brian urged me. I looked back and saw that he was halfway up a spiral staircase in the corner. I headed up after him.
After seeing the desolation of the first floor, seeing the second floor was a shock. It was a loft, and the contrast was startling. The exterior walls were red brick, and there was no ceiling beyond a roof and a skeleton of metal girders overhead to support it. In terms of general area, the loft seemed to have three sections, though it was hard to define because it was such an open layout.
The staircase opened up into what I would have termed the living room, though the one room alone had nearly as much floor space as the ground floor of my house did. The space was divided by two couches, which were set at right angles from one another, both facing a coffee table and one of the largest television sets I had ever seen. Below the television set were a half dozen video game consoles, a DVD player and one or two machines I didn’t recognize. I supposed they might have a TiVo, though I’d never seen one. Speakers larger than the TVs my dad and I had at home sat on either side of the whole setup. Behind the couches were tables, some open space with rugs and shelves set against the walls. The shelves were only half filled with books and magazines, while the rest of the shelf space was filled with odds and ends ranging from a discarded shoe to candles.
The second section was a collection of rooms. It was hard to label them as such, though, because they were more like cubicles, three against each wall with a hallway between them. They were a fair size, and there were six doors, but the walls of each room were only eight or so feet tall, not reaching all the way up to the roof. Three of the doors had artwork spray painted on them. The first door had a crown done in a dramatic graffiti style. The second door had the white silhouette of a man and a woman against a blue background, mimicking the ‘mens’ and ‘womens’ washroom signs that were so common. The third had a girl’s face with puckered lips. I wondered what the story was, there.
“Nice art,” I said, pointing at the door with the crown on it, feeling kind of dumb for making it the first thing I’d said as I entered the room.
“Thanks,” Alec replied. I guess that meant it was his work.
I took another second to look around. The far end of the loft, the last of the three sections, had a large table and some cabinets. Though I couldn’t take a better look without crossing the whole loft, I gathered that their kitchen was in the far end of the loft.
Throughout, there was mess. I felt almost rude for paying attention to it, but there were pizza boxes piled on one of the tables, two dirty plates on the coffee table in front of the couch, and some clothes draped over the back of one of the couches. I saw pop cans – or maybe beer cans – stacked in a pyramid on the table in the far room. It wasn’t so messy that I thought it was offensive, though. It was mess that made a statement… like, ‘This is our space.’ No adult supervision here.
“I’m jealous,” I admitted, meaning it.
“Dork,” Alec said, “What are you jealous for?”
“I meant it’s cool,” I protested, a touch defensively.
Lisa spoke before Alec could reply, “I think what Alec means is that this is your place now too. This is the team’s space, and you’re a member of the team, now.”
“Oh,” I said, feeling dumb. Lisa and Alec headed to the living room, while Brian walked off to the far end of the loft. When Lisa gestured for me to follow her, I did. Alec lay down, taking up an entire couch, so I sat on the opposite end of the couch from Lisa.
“The rooms,” Lisa said, “Far side, in order of closest to farthest, are Alec, bathroom, mine.” That meant Alec’s room was the one with the crown, and Lisa’s door had the face with the puckered lips. She went on, “On the side closer to us, Rachel’s room, Rachel’s dogs’ room, and the storage closet.”
Lisa paused, then glanced at Alec and asked, “You think she-”
“Duh,” Alec cut her off.
“What?” I asked, feeling lost.
“We’ll clean out the storage closet,” Lisa decided, “So you have a room.”
I was taken aback. “You don’t have to do that for me,” I told her, “I’ve got a place.”
Lisa made a face, almost pained. She asked me, “Can we just do it anyways, and not make a fuss? It’d be a lot better if you had your own space here.”
I must have looked confused, because Alec explained, “Brian has an apartment, and was pretty firm about not needing or wanting a room here… but he and Lisa have been arguing regularly because of it. He has nowhere to sleep but the couch if he gets hurt and can’t go to his place, and there’s no place to put his stuff, so it gets left all over. Take the room. You’ll be doing us a favor.”
“Okay,” I said. I added, “Thank you,” as much for the explanation as for the room itself.
“Last time he went up against Shadow Stalker, he came back here and bled all over a white couch,” Lisa groused, “nine hundred dollar couch and we had to replace it.”
“Fucking Shadow Stalker,” Alec commiserated.
Brian came back from the other end of the loft, raising his voice to be heard as he approached, “Rache’s not here, and neither are her dogs. She must be walking them or working. Dammit. I get stressed when she’s out.” He approached the couches and saw Alec sprawled on the one.
“Move your legs,” Brian told him.
“I’m tired. Sit on the other couch,” Alec mumbled, one arm over his face.
Brian glanced at Lisa and I, and Lisa scooted over to make room. Brian glared down at Alec and then sat between us girls. I shifted my weight and tucked one leg under me to give him room.
“So,” Brian explained, “Here’s the deal. Two grand a month, just to be a member of the team. That means you help decide what jobs we do, you go on the jobs, you stay active, you’re available if we need to call.”
“I don’t have a phone,” I admitted.
“We’ll get you one,” he said, like it wasn’t even a concern. It probably wasn’t. “We generally haul in anywhere from ten grand to thirty-five grand for a job. That gets divided four ways… five ways now that you’re on the team.”
I nodded, then exhaled slowly, “It’s not small change.”
Brian nodded, a small smile playing on his lips, “Nope. Now, how on the ball are you, as far as knowing what we’re up against?”
I blinked a few times, then hedged, “For other local capes? I’ve done research online, read the cape magazines religiously for a few years, more since getting my powers… but I dunno. If the past twenty four hours have taught me anything, it’s that there’s a lot I don’t know, and will only find out the hard way.”
Brian smiled. I mean, really smiled. It made me think of a boy rather than a nearly-grown man. He replied, “Most don’t get that, you know? I’ll try to share what I know, so you aren’t caught off guard, but don’t be afraid to ask if there’s anything you’re not sure about, alright?”
I nodded, and his smile widened. He said, through a good natured chuckle, “Can’t tell you how much of a relief it is that you take this stuff seriously, since some people -” he stopped to lean over and kick the side of the couch Alec was lying on, “-need me to twist their arms to get them listening, and some people,” he jerked his thumb over his right shoulder, “think they know everything.”
“I do know everything,” Lisa said, “It’s my power.”
“What?” I said, interrupting Brian. My heartbeat quickened, though I hadn’t exactly been relaxed to begin with, “You’re omniscient?”
Lisa laughed, “No, no. I do know things though. My power tells me stuff.”
Swallowing hard, hoping I wasn’t drawing attention by doing so, I asked, “Like?” Like why I was joining their team?
Lisa sat forward and put her elbows on her knees, “Like how I knew you were at the library when I sent me the messages. If I felt like it, and if I had the know how, I’m sure I could have figured it out by breaking into the website database and digging through the logs to find the address you connected from, but my power just let me skip that step like that.” She snapped her fingers.
“And why exactly did you mention you knew where she was?” Brian queried, his voice a touch too calm.
“I wanted to see how she’d react. Messing with her a little,” Lisa grinned.
“God dammit-” Brian started, but Lisa waved him off.
“I’m filling the newbie in,” she waved him off, “Yell at me later.”
Not giving him a chance to reply, she turned to me and explained, “My power fills in the gaps in my knowledge. I generally need some info to start from, but I can use details my power feeds me to figure out more stuff, and it all sort of compounds itself, giving me a steady flow of info.”
I swallowed, “And you knew that a cape was on the way last night?”
“Yeah,” she said, “Call it a well educated guess.”
“And you knew the stuff about what happened in the PHQ the same way?”
Lisa’s smile widened, “I’ll admit I cheated there. Figuring out passwords is pretty easy with my power. I dig through the PHQ’s digital paperwork and enjoy a little reality TV by way of their surveillance cameras when I’m bored. It’s useful because I’m not only getting the dirt from what I see, hear and read, but my power fills in the details on stuff like changes in their routine and the team politics.”
I stared at her, a good part of me horrified that I’d gotten into an undercover situation opposite a girl with superpowered intuition.
Taking my silence for awe, she grinned her vulpine smile, “It’s not that amazing. I’m really best with concrete stuff. Where things are, timing, encryption, yadda yadda. I can read something out of changes in body language or routine, but it’s less reliable and kind of a headache. Enough information overload without, you know?”
I did know, her explanation echoed my own thoughts regarding my ability to see and hear things through my bugs. Still, her words didn’t make me feel that much better.
“And,” Brian said, still glowering at Lisa, “Even if she knows a lot, that doesn’t mean Lisa can’t be a dumbass sometimes.”
Lisa punched him in the arm.
“So what are your powers then?” I asked Brian and Alec, hoping for a change in topic.
They didn’t get a chance to tell me. I heard barking from downstairs. A matter of heartbeats later I was standing, three paces from the couch. Three snarling dogs had me backed against the wall, drool flying from their mouths as their teeth gnashed and snapped for my hands and face.
Is it wrong that I hope Taylor eventually decides she prefers being a super villain?
To be honest? I agree. If only cause she might pay those bitches at school back then. And I do love me a villain story (or “Evil Campaign”) from time to time, depending on just how villainous. Bank heists n stuff? Totally fine by me. Torturing an raping innocents or mass murder just for the hell of it? Nope. The very edge of what I can tolerate is propably Frozen Soul and Rules-Free VRMMO Life, and those chars do some really fucked up shit, but not without at least some – if really flimsy- reason.
I liked it all… except the description of Tt’s talent. I had hoped for something a little more rule-bound, a little less vague (OK, a lot less vague), and a little more in accord with her nickname. I even had worked something up in my head. sigh 😉
Powers are funny like that. Take Taylor’s confusion over Lung’s pyroknesis, or…dang, most of the good examples haven’t come up.
Out of curiosity, in case you’re still commenting, do you remember what you thought Tattletale’s power was?
Not that I was the one being asked, but I figured it was that she could know things that were being kept secret from her. Tattletale, y’know, like, her power tattles on people. Taylor tries to hide from the Undersiders that she’s shy, Tt knows. Had someone been impersonating “Bug”, Tt would have known, but she didn’t, and since there were only two possibilities (Bug and hiding-that-they-aren’t-Bug), the negative confirmed that [Anonymous Library Surfer] was Bug. Hatchet-onna-stick tries to go in without being noticed, she knows that he’s on his way, but he’s not hiding his identity or sex so she doesn’t know who he is or if he’s even a “he”.
…That is an interesting idea for a power. It would synergize well with someone capable of doing enough detective work to learn things that weren’t actively being kept secret.
Yeah, I thought it was going to work like Allison in Umbrella Academy somehow, but backwards? I was very wrong.
In some ways, I’m hoping to see a lot of the Undersiders, but it would be sad to watch a person’s slow slide into being a criminal.
At the same time, the struggle between “going native” and staying true to her original goal of turning them in (even though normal life is not fun for her at all while the Undersiders are accepting of her…)–that’s material for an interesting story. At least in my view. I could easily be surprised in good ways whatever direction things go from here.
What if they themselves decide to join the good side?
That would require going against their mysterious backer. That doesn’t mean it’s unlikely, as a matter of fact I think it would make for an excellent plot turn, but I guess we’ll see.
Need power and would be great for gathering intel, not so hot in a fight unless you are fighting someone with a game breaker weakness.
At least Taylor found some people she can feel normal around and it might help her be better when dealing with others. Granted they aren’t the best role models, but some are better than none.
It says “Rache’s” instead of “Rachel’s.” Small nitpick, I know.
Intentional. He’s using the short form (not pronouncing the L). You see this elsewhere with ‘Lise’ as opposed to Lisa (not prouncing the A).
Continuing the typo thread:
> DVD player
Similar problem as with Visual Basic in chapter 2.2 – not sure if these trademarks would even exist in Taylor’s world.
> Though I couldn’t take a better look without crossing the whole loft, I gathered that their kitchen was in the far end of the loft.
> Alec lay down, taking up an entire couch, so I sat on the opposite end of the couch from Lisa.
Perhaps it would be bettor to reword these sentences to avoid repeating “loft” and “couch”?
Since I can do so without spoiling, I’d like to mention something I picked up a couple chapters ago:
“Information, it seemed, was a major factor when dealing with capes.”
As indicated by Brian referring to Tattletale’s power as half the reason they’ve been so successful and hence not spoilery at all, this proves to be very true indeed.
In other news, I didn’t pick up on how Taylor was the youngest Undersider when she joined. It’s these little details that make half the fun of rereading stories like this.
How old is Alec?
Um…I can’t remember off the top of my head, actually.
Alec is an ageless enigma
Alec = 15
Taylor = 15
Brian = 17
Tattletale = 16
Bitch = 16
Re-reading while I wait for the next update. So many little details and bits of foreshadowing I never noticed before.
Also realizing how easy it is to down these first few arcs since they’re quite short compared to later on.
Is it strange that I read Rache’s as the German word for revenge?
Sherlock fan or German speaker?
I just started reading this and haven’t been able to stop so far. Excellent.
Typo in: “Like how I knew you were at the library when I sent me the messages.”
I think she might mean conveyor belts, not treadmills. Treadmills are the work-out machines, and I can’t picture why they’d be in an old factory.
Another reader who found their way here from comments on HPMOR. I’m very intrigued so far … looking forward to plot development and about to begin to skip reading comments both for time and for minor spoilerish side comments. I’ll probably catch them on a re-read. (May be months, if the hints re: length are close!)
In this scene, I found some of the “scene setting” details pulling me out of the story a bit. It’s all just nit-picky, but it disrupted the flow for me, anyway. Otherwise, SERIOUSLY, it’s great so far!
Nits: “… weeds grew between slats in the sidewalk …”
Slats? That’s a boardwalk. Sidewalks have cracks or seams.
“I saw a row of power lines without wires stretching between them.”
Uh … those would be power POLES (or towers for the BIG ones), especially since the lines (not usually called wires by folks in the power industry) are apparently gone. I’d just say “saw a row of power poles with no lines” (full stop).
” … herding four near-identical infant children into a factory building with a faded sign.” Toddlers can be herded (well, as much as cats can) but infants get carried somehow. If the “near-identical” is plot significant later, fine; but otherwise it just sent me off on a “why? Quads?” sidetrack. If they are just siblings, the word “similar” would be enough.
The descriptions of the welding shop (Factory? Not exactly.) is a bit confusing — I found myself trying to create a mental blueprint of what is where in the first floor and the loft, etc. The earlier commenter’s remark about the “treadmills” is correct, though now I’m trying to figure out why a welding shop would have conveyors, either. You wouldn’t cover machinery with sheets — too delicate (and small!). Tarps or canvas, maybe.
Is it a loft? That implies one side is open to the space over the first floor. I’m still confused on what walls enclose the rooms (exterior wall on one side, but ?? on the other?). The couches would be at right angles TO each other (not from).
The roof/ rafters/ no ceiling bit is, I think, just a description of a normal industrial-style overhead structure, but worded in a way to make me have to puzzle over it a bit. If there is no ceiling (ie: open rafters) how were the “rows of dusty windows near the ceiling” (near the roof)?
All in all, I lost focus because the setting details distracted me. Until the dogs showed up, of course … [/nits] Carry on!
I was wondering if you realize that the mistakes you describe are valid from a writers point of view but remember the story and a lot of the descriptions you say are wrong are coming in the form of a 16 year old girls point of view. Taylor may not know the difference between a power poles and power towers etc. shes using what she knows.
Wow. I read this ~4 years ago; commented then; and get a notification that someone wants to reply NOW?!?!
OK — First — I said up front that these were nit-picks.
Second — of course it is from her point of view. MY point TO THE WRITER was that the way he had written her point of view included some distracting choices that pulled ME out of the story in confusion (such as the idea that infants were bring walked in). It effects flow and reader engagement.
If the character’s POV causes the reader to go “Wait … what?!?!” the writer could chose to fix that while still writing for a 16yo girl. It’s a writer/editor choice.
Finally — having slogged though this EPIC story 4 years ago, I’m still boggled and astounded and impressed! It enthralled me then, though it did leaved me drained and dazed!
Maybe don’t use the word “nit” because Bug-girl controls those…
I assume the “four indentical infant children” thing is just Wildbow’s way of expressing his view that all babies look the same.
Small pronoun issue: “Like how I knew you were at the library when I sent me the messages.”
I love Taylor actually assuming that Lisa was omniscient… I believe they classify TT as a Thinker 7 later, and she’s pretty damn powerful, so how would omniscience rank?
Careful – don’t allude to future events, or I have to edit comments to remove spoilers.
“Both the chain and door had rusted so much that I ‘expected’ that neither offered any use.”
I believe the common expression is ‘suspected’.
Such a cool superhero name for Taylor would have been Hive Mind. If only…
Taylor: “Oh noes, what if she figures out I’m undercover.”
Tattletale: “BTW, I’m not that good at figuring out people’s ulterior motives.”
Taylor: “Whew, dodged a bullet there.”
I’m entirely convinced.
That was a pleasant introduction into a crime group. Leaves you wanting to join one yourself.
Starting this late in the game; thank you for a good story and for reigning in the spoiler-comments.
Your development of bullying teenage girls seems very accurate (to this non-female), and I appreciate the fact of a female protagonist superhero in general.
Silk actually insulates very well. You can buy very effective silk comforters and long underwear.
Nicely done, please keep it up.
Silk thermals \o/
>Throughout, there was mess.< This seems like awkward wording, but it might just sound weird because I don't usually see it written like that. Figured I would point it out just in case. 🙂
Hi wildbow! Just an observation…you can’t really herd infants. Maybe change word to toddlers?? Loving your work!!
I find “treadmills” to be a bad description of what your trying to convey on this page when talking about the welding plant. I would say conveyor or conveyor belt. Other then that, I am liking this story.
his chapter reminds me of inturlude 1, Hey danny hear any news, yeah my daughter just become on of the newest local supervillians. Refering to when danny and taylor were talking about his coworker who became a henchmen.
I still don’t get why this is called Worm
Lol, Lisa´s Power is completely imaginary. “Ohh you don´t know? Now you do” lel
I would suspect that Lisa knows that Bug wants to betray them but also knows the she will get to “love” the team.